Comments | zooey_glass04: SPN fic: Dreams in Color (Pre-series; Dean/OFC)

zooey_glass04

SPN fic: Dreams in Color (Pre-series; Dean/OFC)

Mar 30, 2009 21:04

Title: Dreams in Color
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: R
Pairing/Characters: Dean/OFC
Disclaimer: Fun, not profit
Wordcount: c. 5500
Notes: Many thanks to the delightful parenthetical for betaing, and the fabulous sarahetc for Ameripicking. They're both wonderful.
Summary: Pre-series: takes place prior to 4.13 'After School Special' (no spoilers for any ep.)

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pre-series, dean, supernatural, fanfiction, dean/ofc, het

Comments 53

parenthetical March 30 2009, 20:05:46 UTC

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, so pleased to see this posted! It's awesome, my darling. Poor Dean, he breaks my heart. I totally consider this canon. And Mel is kick-ass, I love her. Love love love!

zooey_glass04 March 30 2009, 20:34:08 UTC

Heeee, thank you, my love! Another in my selection of emo sadtime fics, hahaha. I am quite in love with Mel also, though :D

Thank you for all your beta mofodom \0/

musesfool March 30 2009, 20:43:10 UTC

This is lovely. Poor Dean, finding someone he really likes and having to leave her behind like everything else.

zooey_glass04 March 30 2009, 20:47:22 UTC

Thank you! I feel a little bad giving Dean yet more angst, but it was sadly inevitable.

I'm glad you enjoyed - thanks for commenting :D

zelost_mind March 30 2009, 21:31:13 UTC

This is sweet. I love the way Dean is fifteen y'know? Awkward and uncertain. Great voices, your OC and Sam and teenage!Dean.

I really enjoyed it.

Thanks for sharing. :D

zooey_glass04 April 4 2009, 23:42:13 UTC

Thank you for reading. I'm really happy to know he came across convincingly as a fifteen-year-old - I am so intrigued by how Dean must have been before he developed all the 'front' we see in him as an adult.

I'm very glad you enjoyed - thanks for the lovely feedback!

black_samvara March 30 2009, 23:59:41 UTC

Dean! His poor little heart, I like him being all tentative and real.

zooey_glass04 April 4 2009, 23:43:28 UTC

Heee, thank you. I'm so happy to know he came across as real <3

Glad you enjoyed!

missyjack March 31 2009, 00:14:26 UTC

LOVE this. Just a wonderful look at how growing up would ve been for Dean - the constant leaving. Mel's a great creation and perfect with Dean. And you right first time sex so well!

zooey_glass04 April 4 2009, 23:56:47 UTC

Oh yeay, thank you very much!

I'm really happy that Mel came across well - I always work hard with my OCs and I'm particularly fond of her. And it's wonderful to know the sex seemed convincing :D

Glad you enjoyed - thank you for the lovely feedback!