I'll Be Yours (A Love Story) [Ch 3/?]

[zolac_no_miko]

Title: I'll Be Yours (A Love Story) [Ch 3/?]
Continuity: Comics!verse AU, based on post-Crisis continuity.
Rating: Very M.
This chapter-
Characters/Pairings: Timothy Drake, with appearances by Dick Grayson, Bruce Wayne, and Pamela Isley; one-sided Tim/Dick, sorta.
Word Count: 2111
Summary: Tim settles for stalking the Batman, and gets a lot more

Comments

[magusronin]

*grins* Oh creepy!Timmy. I was wondering when the next chapter of this would be coming out. :)

Isley better watch out, crazy stalker Timmy knows where she sleeps, and she touched something that doesn't belong to her. XD

Someone really needs to write a Barbara/Charlie story like this. Charlie's another of DC's stalker characters.

[zolac_no_miko]

Heh, so was I. @_@ If you'd asked me yesterday, I would've had no idea. I was worried... I felt like I was dragging in the writing department this month, but it looks like I'm right on "schedule"... so far I've been churning this out every 30 days, ish, and if there are no major changes in my life it'll probably continue that way. "Live Without" is going a bit slower, woe

[magusronin]

Aw, good thing I forgot that I was going to ask you. ^_

[zolac_no_miko]

I dunno... I hope so? I was all excited on Friday because I was convinced I'd have it finished and ready to post that day. And then I got home and I realized I was nowhere near done with it. I made some good progress with it the day before yesterday, so I'm getting there... I've got, like, three more points to cover before the end of the chapter. And I'm thinking I'll maybe not start Ch 4 of Love Story until I'm done with this chapter of Live Without. So, in a few days, maybe? Maaaaaybe?

Oh man, I totally know about having to make decisions about what to include, and when. Almost this entire chapter that I just posted wasn't in my original plan... or it was, but not yet, not until much later. But I couldn't figure out how to include it later in a way that made sense, so I was forced to include it now, at the cost of some suspense.

[larsinger29]

Tim is so thoroughly creeeeepy in this! His obsession is such that it's frightening. My gut was twisting through this, reading through Tim's eyes and seeing his warped sense of purpose.

I love it.

You are doing a marvelous job of showing just how extreme Tim's stalking is. The tension is continuously being built in this piece, and I'm so eager to see where you take it!

[zolac_no_miko]

*flail* Yaaaaaay! :DD I'm so glad all of this is working for you. :DD

[mosrael]

I gotta say, I'm not usually a Batfan by any means, but I'm definitely reading this. It's accessible enough to someone who's partly familiar with canon, without being too explainy. And it's fascinating! The twisted stories are my favorite kind, and you've given this one a great intensity and creep factor. <3

[zolac_no_miko]

:D Why hello there, stranger! Long time no see!

I can't tell you how immensely pleased I am that you're enjoying this enough to dip into unfamiliar, Bat-infested waters. And I'm happy to hear that I've managed to make the story user-friendly. ^_^

Hells yeah the creepy stuff is the best! So glad you approve~!

[harechan]

I... knew he got pictures. D: And the creeped-out-ness continues.

There is a lot of suspense and tension building in this. The even canter of Tim's thoughts are a contributing factor. He's just so calm with little minor bursts of angry like it's just bubbling below the surface (a nice touch having him refer to Isley as "the bitch").

I feel sorry for Pamela. She won't be happy once Tim decides what to do with her, I think.

[zolac_no_miko]

Little Timmy loves his camera, yes he does, oh yes~...

I'm thrilled to have you in such suspense. :DD Expect that feeling to continue... from here on out Timmy's going to be a busy little boy, and I'm not always going to show you what he's up to right away. ...Yeah, Timmy does angry in a very cold, detached kind of way (he's cold and detached about everything... except Dick~). And you know it's trouble if he's angry enough to swear. He's generally not a vulgar kind of guy.

Ahahaha. No. Not so much.

[zolac_no_miko]

Heh. Working on it! ^_^