I'll Be Yours (A Love Story) [Ch 2/?]

Sep 21, 2010 19:28

Title: I'll Be Yours (A Love Story) [Ch 2 ( Read more... )

batman, i'll be yours, fanfic, dick grayson, writey, robin, batfic, tim drake

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This icon is the face Timmy is making at me EVERY SECOND OF THE DAY I am not writing. T_T zolac_no_miko September 22 2010, 04:11:10 UTC
I knooooooow, I'm sorry! I want more scary!Timmy too, but I needed to get some Plot out of the way. I think the Timmy chapters will generally be shorter... on the one hand, less Timmy, but on the other hand, your Timmy will be delivered more quickly. And you can be sure I will be writing as quickly as I can... if only because I am afraid of what Timmy will do to me if I don't. (He is very good at getting his hands on sharp things, and he knows where I sleep. T_T)

Love your icon, btw, what a great scene in the comics. And so appropriate! I know technically what we have there is Babs being a creepy stalker, but clearly Timmy is enjoying the view~!

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Oh wow. harechan September 22 2010, 04:16:30 UTC
This. I love this. This was very well done. And the firing scene? Some powerful stuff there. I could feel Bruce's anger (if that makes sense) and Dick's confusion and hurt. My heart was breaking for Dick and Bruce both by the end because you know Bruce is scared that Dick would die and... ;_;

“Patrol? Heck no. I want soup!”
This was so Dick. And it made me smile.

Looking forward to more! Even if Tim creeps me out... I wonder how many pictures he got the night Dick was poisoned... Gah! Why am I doing that to myself!? XD

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zolac_no_miko September 22 2010, 04:27:51 UTC
Yaaaaaay, thank you! :DD I'm glad the emotional impact of the last scene came through so powerfully for you. ...Yeah, Bruce is kind of a gigantic idiot sometimes, but he means well. He just wants to keep Dickie safe!

Haha that line made me giggle too. So I'm glad I'm not the only one. ^_^

Bwahahahahaha~! Look what I've done to you! >:D *unrepentant*

...Also EEEEEEEEE your icon is so cute~!

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zolac_no_miko September 23 2010, 00:41:46 UTC
Haha, yay! I'm glad my Ivy worked for you... of the three she was definitely the character I've had the least exposure to, so I felt kind of self-conscious about writing her. I guess she kind of wrote herself, it all felt very natural. As for when we might see her again... although she is very important to the plot of this story, she's actually in very little of it. But I had a hell of a lot of fun writing her, so who knows? Maybe she'll pop up in something else.

=^_^= I'm so pleased my Bruce came through well for you! I am a Batman fan first and foremost, and writing Bruce is a daunting task because he is a really difficult character, but I adore him so I really need to get him right! ...I've always felt that the Firing Incident was very complicated... he's angry at Dick, but yes, I believe a large part of that comes from love and worry. Unfortunately, Bruce is kind of Fail in the emotional department, so he's not very good at articulating his feelings in a way that other people can understand ( ... )

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larsinger29 September 22 2010, 20:47:56 UTC
Oh, this was a wonderful look at the falling out between Bruce and Dick! The emotions were just so prevalent throughout the chapter. I felt the tension, fear, and despair as though I was experiencing the situations right along with the characters.

You did a superb job making Isley absolutely wicked, and I loved how nonchalantly she was about the two dead bodies in her greenhouse. That simple reaction drove home how dangerous she really was.

I'm glad you gave us this glimpse into what is occurring between Bruce and Dick. I'm very interested to see just how Tim inserts himself in this dark, twisted tale you've got going on. Will he go to Dick first? Or will he approach Bruce and insert himself into his life? I'm sure no matter where you take this I'll continue to be enthralled!

Superb job! I am so looking forward to your next chapter!

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zolac_no_miko September 23 2010, 04:52:43 UTC
Hurray! I'm glad all of that came through so strongly for you.

Meh, what does Ivy care about them? They're just people. >:D

Thank you so much... it absolutely makes my day to see people getting so excited about my story and where it's going. =^_^=

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gemfyre September 22 2010, 23:32:11 UTC
Okay. Need more right now.

I only got into the whole Batman thing after seeing Dark Knight (so a measly 2 years), am now thoroughly obsessed and swing from character to character and recently, my fascination has been with Tim so I think I'll like this. ;)

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zolac_no_miko September 23 2010, 04:58:06 UTC
Eeee! =^_^= So demanding~! I'm not even going to pretend that doesn't make me happy. I WILL DO MY BEST TO WRITE QUICKLY! T_T

Haha, welcome to the fandom~! I've been in since Batman: The Animated Series, and the obsession has only grown worse with time. ...The Nolan movies are not a bad way to start, I must say. I do adore them like burning, especially after the travesties that were Batman Forever and Batman and Robin.

Tim is FANTASTIC. ...It's impossible for me to choose between Batfamily, but I really do adore him. So of course I had to turn him into Creepy Creeperson McCreeperface. :DD

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