Comments | zjofierose: Radio #1

zjofierose

Radio #1

Apr 08, 2011 23:16

Title: Radio #1
Pairing: Pinto
Word Count: ~3k
Rating: NC-17
Prompt/Summary: AU - Some kind of mentor/mentee relationship with Zach as the mentor...could be like teacher/student, boss/intern, some kind of military instructor/cadet thing, or whatever else you can think of that's similar...adult/teen is okay.
Disclaimer: MADE UP. NOT REAL.
A/N: ( Read more... )

ficficfic, smut, pinto, pwp, au, rating: nc-17

Comments 23

medea_fic April 9 2011, 06:30:31 UTC

I still love this. Looooove. I love that Chris is this cocky little bastard who pretends to be dumb. I love that Zach is this vaguely pretentious wanker who is just so damn intrigued. I love the radio stuff especially. I said it before to you but I'll say it again - I love when I learn stuff with my porn!

And speaking of, this is so damn hot, Zjo. EPIC HOTNESS! (cf: icon.)

medea_fic April 9 2011, 06:32:30 UTC

Also still loving and laughing at this line especially: "the condom Chris is waving like a tiny flag "

zjofierose April 9 2011, 06:48:07 UTC

LOL. glad you liked it, bb! <333

ksalterego April 9 2011, 12:31:25 UTC

oh my gosh, just EVERYTHING! this is terrific and cute and fun and HOT, and <3!!!

zjofierose April 11 2011, 08:58:40 UTC

hee, thanks hon! :)

coeurdesoleil April 9 2011, 14:19:11 UTC

Mmmm I love love the building UST in this, and how Zach initially thought Chris was dull and kinda dumb but then he could't stop thinking about him and falling more and more in lust with him. Also I can totally picture Chris being less and less subtle about getting into Zach's personal space without Zach ever cottoning until that final scene :)

This was fun and sexy!

zjofierose April 11 2011, 08:59:00 UTC

yay, glad you liked it! :D

<3

rae1013 April 9 2011, 15:01:33 UTC

At some point he will also stop masturbating to the sound of Chris’ voice giving station identifications. That might help, who knows?

Died, bb! Freaking died! So hot, so clever. Just, guh!

zjofierose April 11 2011, 08:59:35 UTC

hahahha! (it does seem like it would complicate things, no?)

<3

amerasu1013 April 9 2011, 23:30:50 UTC

Ohh. Ohhhhh this was great! First Zach so annoyed at that stupid farm boy, and Chris so cute and eager, like a puppy, and then! Chris trying to be forceful! But ha, not with Zach! Underling, haha! Oh this was great and funny and so damn hot, I loved it!!
Also I learned some really interesting stuff about how radio stations work! ;P

zjofierose April 11 2011, 09:00:07 UTC

hahha, glad you liked it bb! thanks for reading. :D