DOI exorcism fic - Clarity (G)

[ziparumpazoo]

I did finish my dayofindulgence fic way back when, but I'm always up for a good exorcism. I really have no idea where I was going with this, or even if it was supposed to be part of something bigger, but it's cluttering up my hard drive and messing up my karma.

Untitled, standalone scene. Category... um... Bob? (aka, Sam, Jack, and a rifle)

Comments

[binkii822]

Woe!

It is all...just...*waves hands*..with the imagery and trigger squeezing and hopeless situation...

Woe!

[ziparumpazoo]

Awe thanks. Teamwork, baby! :)

[supplyship]

Love this liek whoa. Such beautiful and intense imagery! Jack and Sam as spotter/shooter = WIN.

[ziparumpazoo]

Actually, I started this for your birthday because Sam+gun=OTP, and then bonus Jack, but it was all of three paragraphs, and I started something else, so I'm really tickled that you like it now. :D

[ziparumpazoo]

the teamwork, the seamless trust between soldiers who've shared combat together.

This was very much what I was aiming for when started writing this. There is a certain intimacy and trust that is bred through surviving extreme situations. I'm glad that part did not get sidetracked by my distracted writing brain. Thanks.

[gunhilda]

This is very well done, and I think it actually stands well alone.

[ziparumpazoo]

Thank you very much. It doesn't seem as incomplete, in retrospect. :)

[holdouttrout]

This is really, really vivid and good. I love the teamwork between them, and the idea that even though Jack is pointing out things for Sam, she's the one with the gun. :-)

[ziparumpazoo]

They do make a good team, and Jack will let her handles the gun any day. ;)
Thanks!