I am so gleeful to see this - even more so, since the story was refusing to sit in the 100 word zone. I'll take the extra words, paragraphs, future chapters….(????)….happily. *g* I love the descriptive detail, but especially the last few paras - you know how to set a lure and hook - you've successfully got me dangling, and Olivia's 're-entry' into Mid-world, post season four finale,is perfect. Thank you for coming back to this. <3
I'm really glad you like this bit. I could give you the whole, complete story now, except for the big gaping hole right before the end that ties everything together and is stubbornly refusing to be written. On-call weeks are wonderful for trying to accomplish anything productive. I want my brain back. ;) Also, thank you for being so patient!
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I love the descriptive detail, but especially the last few paras - you know how to set a lure and hook - you've successfully got me dangling, and Olivia's 're-entry' into Mid-world, post season four finale,is perfect.
Thank you for coming back to this. <3
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Also, thank you for being so patient!
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