Snippet: Feed

[zinkini]

Title: Feed 
Pairing: Eduardo/Mark
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: TSN and its characters are not mine.
Summary: A snippet of Eduardo's and Mark's relationship from Harvard. WARNING: Boys with issues.

Comments

[yunsi]

On one hand Mark respects these Final Clubs for embodying prestige and every trait he believes he doesn’t have, and on the other hand, he resents these clubs for the same reason.

Ohhh Mark. =/ And Eduardo trying to get him to UNDERSTAND. I don't know whether I should be screaming or crying right now...

I liked the concept of their relationship being based on what they feed to each other. The whole thing was really well executed. =]

[zinkini]

Thanks! I'm glad that the portrayal of the relationship works. I was a little hesitant in characterizing Mark and Eduardo this way. Especially Mark.

[xbriyeon]

asldknldkfngf. perfect quote to end it by the end. T-T

[zinkini]

Thank you! It kills me to use that quote in this context, but I'm glad it has the intended effect. ;___;

[skyearth85]

Loving it and finding very, very interesting how you "worked" this part of their relationship :)

[zinkini]

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoy this perspective of Mark's and Eduardo's relationship. :D