Comments | zinfic: ST XI fic: Yours For the Asking (Kirk/McCoy, PG-13)

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ST XI fic: Yours For the Asking (Kirk/McCoy, PG-13)

Jul 03, 2009 08:48

Title: Yours For the Asking
Author: Zinnith
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: ~6500
Warnings: Rated for language, blood, off-screen violence, non-explicit sex
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Also, I'm a writer, not a doctor.

Notes: My extremely late entry for the Kirk/McCoy challenge. I picked the prompt: 01. McCoy gets hurt on-planet and ( Read more... )

challenges, star trek: fic, kirk/mccoy

Comments 104

missmarie9 July 3 2009, 13:56:28 UTC

Perfect fic. I was waiting for someone to write this prompt. And I like how you integrated pivitol moments of their past into the present situation.

zinfic July 3 2009, 16:12:28 UTC

Thank you! The prompt just called out to me and begged to be written ;)

confusedkayt July 3 2009, 14:16:10 UTC

This was super! So fascinating nd in-character and scry and wrenching and FUN by turns. :)

zinfic July 3 2009, 16:12:56 UTC

Aw, thank you. I'm glad you liked it!

thalialunacy July 3 2009, 14:30:19 UTC

but Spock is doing that thing where he listens carefully and then completely ignores every word Jim says.
And that is their awesome BFFery in a nutshell. :D

Bones rolls his eyes. "Let me think, do I want to spend the next five years in a tin can surrounded by the vacum of space, seeking out new life and civilisations and diseases and new horrible ways to die?" He sighs. "Sure, why not. It's not like there's anyone else I'd trust with the job of keeping you and your Messiah complex alive."

It turns out Bones already has all his things packed.

ARGH THAT IS PERFECT. This whole thing is perfect. WELL DONE, BB. <3<3

zinfic July 3 2009, 16:52:55 UTC

Ah, yes, because the kind of friends Jim needs the most are the ones who won't do what he says but what he needs. Thank you!

ennyousai July 3 2009, 14:34:36 UTC

I have a weakness for stories where Bones is the one who needs help, and this was just lovely. Thank you. <3

zinfic July 3 2009, 16:50:30 UTC

Me too! It's easy to have him as the caretaker, and I can't deny that Jim is very pretty when whumped, but I love to turn the tables on them now and then ;)

blcwriter July 3 2009, 14:41:22 UTC

Very, very nice-- the view inside Jim's head is excellent.

zinfic July 3 2009, 16:57:54 UTC

Thank you! This was my first Jim POV so I'm glad you thought he was in-character. *g*