We Dance To the Sound of Sirens, Chapter Thirty-Nine

[zillah_slash]

Title: We Dance To the Sound of Sirens, Chapter Thirty-Nine
Fandom: Adam Lambert
Pairing: Adam/Tommy
Rating: PG-13
Author: i_amthecosmosWord Count: 7,375

Comments

[fasciculations]

"Annie, his favorite nurse" made me smile. :)

Nice cliffhanger there.

[zillah_slash]

:)

I wouldn't have cliffhanged it if I could have handled writing another 5,000 words. That was me hitting the wall more than being intentionally teasy. Thanks.

[vlredreign]

ZOMG, SIRENS!!!!!!!!!!! *scrolls back up to read*

[vlredreign]

Dude............WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!?!?!?! DIDN'T I LOVE YOU ENOUGH!?!?! OH, GOD..................*sobbing*

[zillah_slash]

Meep!

The Crying Fred icon and now this! You guys are scaring me.

I can't give anything away, but they will both be okay. They actually need time apart since they're so dependent on each other. Adam doesn't believe it, but they do.

[vlredreign]

But, but.......ADAM WILL CRY!!!!! AND, AND....CASSIDY WILL BE SAD!!!!!! AND....KRIS'S MAMA WILL MAKE FUDGE THAT NO ONE WILL EAT AND ANOOP WILL BE MAD!!!!!!!

*sobs some more*

[zillah_slash]

This must be why I'm getting more comments on my Adam/Sauli stories now. I can't write angst with that smiling Finn.

Anoop will be mad. He already wants to punch Thomas's face off.

Think about the before-leaving sex! Just think about it!

(And who said that Tommy didn't eat that fudge? It's only good for a day or two, but I bet he didn't mind if it had gotten hard.)

[wynkat1313]

holy hell! ouch and ouch... so much going on. wow!

[zillah_slash]

There's a lot going on-it was hell to write since it's largely just people walking into a hospital room to give Tommy a hard time. So everything had to revolve around the conversations.

Writing Tommy's dad was interesting. Here's a guy how has only projected inflexibility and anger in Tommy's memories of him. And he still has that, but now he's trying to show emotion and he kind of fails at it. It's tearing Tommy up-part of him wants to strangle Thomas for daring to try to make himself human to him.

[hannab2]

Awww When will these boys ever be allowed to be happy. :/ Can't Tommy just hire a Security guard? I can't believe he has to leave & give up all he's worked so hard for. Poor Adam.

I know this is realistic in the sense that major problems like these can't be solved easily or quickly. But it's so hard to watch them suffer.

[zillah_slash]

I'm getting afraid to read my feedback. Tommy has worked very hard, and he doesn't want to go. He'll probably try to work out another solution. He has put his dad's offer last on the list.