Whisper Drabble

Jan 26, 2011 13:32

  Khailee burst into the room, heart in her throat as she lunged for the small crib in the corner.  Her hands latching onto the sides, she stared down at the tousled blankets, the small indent that her son’s slight weight had left behind.

Her son was gone, stolen away when she least expected it.

Khailee blinked as her grip tightened ( Read more... )

drabble, whisper 'verse, original fiction

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kohara_aho177 January 26 2011, 22:16:16 UTC
you...always leave me wanting more....
that was so good though!! I'm (still) excited for this full story! you'll get it done in time ^^

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zilentdreamer January 26 2011, 23:21:47 UTC
I hope so...*sigh*

Until then, I can content myself with torturing you I suppose.

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kohara_aho177 January 27 2011, 04:47:30 UTC
i would be surprised if you didn't haha

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mee_eep January 26 2011, 22:45:42 UTC
lovely lot of tension/anguish!

Very emotive, really want to read more.

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zilentdreamer January 26 2011, 23:22:12 UTC
And you will....as soon as i write it.

hehehe

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charisstoma January 27 2011, 02:46:47 UTC
Perhaps I am not like everyone else but perhaps I am. I loved the feeling of power. Of being able to rip the world apart if need be to have my child safe with me again or have a vengence so terrible on whoever stole that child from me. To have the power to end the world or rescue the one I love. Yes, that would be very satisfying.
*gives angelic smile* And I'd use it only for good.

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zilentdreamer January 27 2011, 06:21:47 UTC
That was actually what I was going for. The primal part of everyone that will do what needs to be done when someone we care about is in danger.

I suppose I would use it for good...just depends on how you define 'good'.

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