I agree it's a bit choppy in some places, but it's not that bad. I think you'd best stick when you say 703/05/07 with 703/705/707, it doesn't save that much space by omitting and the reader gets to think less :). Is this all? The last sentence makes it feel done.
So apparently it's beta day today/yesterday according to fandom. *appreciates Nenya for betaing even though I'm the one who wants to be an editor*
As far as I know, I don't need to do any further reporting. The next step is to work out the structure of this piece with my prof., and then to tighten it overall. For a last-minute assignment, I think it turned out better than it should have been.
Yes, you've gotten a bunch of nice icons lately :)
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you mean "an" ABC.
I agree it's a bit choppy in some places, but it's not that bad. I think you'd best stick when you say 703/05/07 with 703/705/707, it doesn't save that much space by omitting and the reader gets to think less :). Is this all? The last sentence makes it feel done.
I love dropsofsunshine's icons.
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So apparently it's beta day today/yesterday according to fandom. *appreciates Nenya for betaing even though I'm the one who wants to be an editor*
As far as I know, I don't need to do any further reporting. The next step is to work out the structure of this piece with my prof., and then to tighten it overall. For a last-minute assignment, I think it turned out better than it should have been.
Yes, you've gotten a bunch of nice icons lately :)
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