For what it's worth, what passes as an article

Oct 13, 2005 15:14

Need sleep... need to get out of soaking wet clothes...

But, hey, I finally sat my a** down and wrote something. Three hours for 596 words (woe), and it's not even good :\

Immigration and ESL )

writing, journalism

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nenyaentwhistle October 13 2005, 20:50:49 UTC
and ABC

you mean "an" ABC.

I agree it's a bit choppy in some places, but it's not that bad. I think you'd best stick when you say 703/05/07 with 703/705/707, it doesn't save that much space by omitting and the reader gets to think less :). Is this all? The last sentence makes it feel done.

I love dropsofsunshine's icons.

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ziasudra October 13 2005, 22:26:40 UTC
Yay for nitpicking... thanks!

So apparently it's beta day today/yesterday according to fandom. *appreciates Nenya for betaing even though I'm the one who wants to be an editor*

As far as I know, I don't need to do any further reporting. The next step is to work out the structure of this piece with my prof., and then to tighten it overall. For a last-minute assignment, I think it turned out better than it should have been.

Yes, you've gotten a bunch of nice icons lately :)

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