For, lo, I have written fic

May 09, 2010 23:20

Title: You Kill Me
Fandom: DC Flash Rogues, Trickster-centric
Pairing: Pipster
Wordcount: 402
Rating: um, T or PG
Warnings: Only for some language, implications of canon nastiness
Notes: Written completely involuntarily. Seriously, it just popped itself out there when I was trying to write a response to one of piper_trickster 's Awesome Anons, Jinx. Thanks for the ( Read more... )

fanfic, rogues, flash, trickster, fic, pipster, i am weak

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eliyes May 10 2010, 09:01:17 UTC
Wow.

You need to write fic more.

Just, wow.

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ziarenete13x May 10 2010, 22:58:55 UTC
I have some other ideas, but they're mostly fluff or random floating bits smaller than this. That's why I draw more often. I do have some comic scripts written, so now that I have time, I might be able to finish them?

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eliyes May 11 2010, 19:51:53 UTC
I hope you do get time to give us more stories, in text or comic form, because I am completely selfish that way. Seriously, normally I really avoid reading stories written addressing "you", but this was so awesome I'm not sure I fully realized that's what you did until the third read-through! And it does not bother me.

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ziarenete13x May 11 2010, 21:03:53 UTC
I totally get the selfishness thing, because I do it too. Never fear, for I'm working on finishing a few things I half-started during the semester, and have a pretty good (if decidedly evil) idea left over from my calendar entry...

I'm really not a fan of second person either. But of course this comes out! This actually started as third person, subject to James' pov when this was just a discussion comment to someone. But that lead to a LOT of 'he's and pronoun confusion, which I hate just as much. Besides, my conversational style leads right to the address of a character, and the ending punch refused to be written as anything but.

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Yeah. (Jinx) anonymous May 10 2010, 09:27:35 UTC
Yeah, it's just like that.

And your broken nose still hurts like hell and your broken ribs are definitely NOT healing and there's something wrong that hurts way down deep inside but at least you're not spitting up BLOOD every morning anymore and all of that is NOTHING compared to the inescapable FACT that Hartley Rathaway's gone and stolen your heart and you didn't even see him DO it.

Nice work, Zia.

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PS (Jinx again) anonymous May 10 2010, 11:10:21 UTC
Suggested title: You Kill Me

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Re: PS (Jinx again) ziarenete13x May 10 2010, 23:00:02 UTC
The obvious, I overlook it *facepalm*

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Re: Yeah. (Jinx) ziarenete13x May 10 2010, 23:00:34 UTC
Thanks!

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joasakura May 10 2010, 10:56:35 UTC
very nice!!!

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ziarenete13x May 10 2010, 22:59:35 UTC
Thanks! (Your icon! I snerk every time I see it!)

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mythnlynx May 10 2010, 11:15:01 UTC
Yes. This. ♥♥♥

And so much time was wasted, your courage deserting you again and again. You're the Trickster! You're beyond all the rules and this is the only time you ever gave a damn what anyone else thought. But it's only now, when the joke's on you, that you can call his name. And now that it's you or him, you gotta choose.

And you know it's love, because, just this once, you couldn't choose yourself.

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ziarenete13x May 10 2010, 23:02:29 UTC
♥♥♥ u

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madripoor_rose May 10 2010, 23:21:34 UTC
Nice little POV piece, loved it.

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ziarenete13x May 11 2010, 00:08:28 UTC
Thank you.

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