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I-Man Halloween Fic: By The Light Of The Silvery Moon

Nov 06, 2009 12:05

Title: By the Light of the Silvery Moon
Author: zhiverny6
Fandom: The Invisible Man
Pairing: Bobby/Darien
Ratings: PG, for scary monsters
Wordcount:~5000 words
Spoilers: For "Legends"

Summary: A silly Halloween story in which Bobby Hobbes has a bad night. Written for the hot_donuts 2009 I-Man ficfest, for lydiabell 's prompt, "Bobby/Darien, worry".

( By the Light of the Silvery Moon )

Comments 15

tygermama November 7 2009, 00:02:50 UTC

I want a big dish of beef chow mien. LOL

This was beautiful, love the banter, you did a great job!

zhiverny6 November 8 2009, 15:45:53 UTC

Oh, good! I didn't know if anyone would get a "Werewolves of London" reference. Just because it's been stuck in my head all week... :D Thank you!

mlyn November 7 2009, 01:52:38 UTC

Perfect voices and banter. And I loooove Bobby snapping his towel at Darien. XD

zhiverny6 November 8 2009, 15:50:07 UTC

Thank you! Any excuse to get Bobby into a towel, or out of one.

And, *cough*, can I say how much I love your icon? My, but he can be sexy when he wants to be. :D

mlyn November 8 2009, 16:28:14 UTC

Thank you! I decided I needed an icon that showed the slashy side of the show. I'm glad that comes through.

wishfulaces November 7 2009, 16:51:21 UTC

"Tinkerbell didn't give me 38 stitches." Awesome banter! Every one of them, so perfectly in character, and you did a great job using mostly dialogue to convey everything. So much fun! Yay, team!

zhiverny6 November 9 2009, 04:50:44 UTC

Thank you, thank you! It is a little goofy - I'm glad it worked.

(I swear, I thought I posted this this morning. The livejournal, it hates me. If you're getting this for the second time, um, thanks again! ;)

wishfulaces November 9 2009, 13:17:28 UTC

If Darien can be the (invisible) Headless Horseman, then Bobby Hobbes might as well be a werewolf. Hee!

(LJ, sometimes it hates everyone. But I'm pretty sure this is the only time I got this comment.) :)

trascendenza November 9 2009, 06:33:19 UTC

Oh my God, the banter in this just *cracked* me up. The Bobby-and-Darien back and forths were so perfect, with all the vague references to things that only they understand. The scene with the towel chasing and Marco Polo was delish and hilarious. And Bobbyhobbes the werewolf! Ahahaha. I love this to bits. <3

zhiverny6 November 10 2009, 19:02:41 UTC

Thank you! This makes me very happy. *dance, dance, dance*

dorinda November 11 2009, 01:28:52 UTC

Eeeee hee hee, it's the I-Man Hallowe'en Special! I love the costumes everyone chose, especially the Official. Eberts would be the tidiest pirate on the seven seas. And Claire is great! Always a struggle, the addiction to seasonal candies. *g*

The level of broccoli between the guys is delicious! Like:

Darien asked in an undertone, “Did you get the…”
“Yeah,” whispered Bobby.
“And you found all the…”
“Mmhm.

...and speaking of delicious, Bobby losing his towel and winning the hide-and-seek by pinning Darien to the ground? NOM NOM NOM. :D

zhiverny6 November 12 2009, 21:41:15 UTC

Yeee! Thank you! *falls over - dead, but happy*

I've seen references to "broccoli" forever. I'm going to have to spend some long weekend poking around Fanlore. Fandom makes slightly more sense now.

Incidentally, I owe you, oh, eight years worth of feedback. The reason I own I Spy dvds is because of you. So, thank you :D

dorinda November 17 2009, 05:59:23 UTC

Heeeee hee hee... I get that way with Fanlore too. *click* "Huh." *click* "Hmmmm." *click* "Oh!" :D

The reason I own I Spy dvds is because of you.

Aw! Thank you very much for saying so! I'm honored to know it. Ahhhh, I Spy. ♥ And actually, in a coincidental-I-swear burst of self-pimpery-- just this morning I posted a big picspam/essay dealio about Scotty, for choc_fic's "100 Days of Color" celebration. It was very difficult to make myself stop screencapping. The discs should come with a special warning! *pets them*