Fix This (1/1)

[zhian_tara]

I wrote this Wednesday during first period, because invisible kissing is great. Somehow it got angsty and plotty. Go figure.

Title: Fix This
Fandom: Eureka
Pairing: Jack/Nathan, established (Hence, AU for series)
Rating: PG
Warnings: Slight language, slash, SPOILERS FOR 2x09 "Sight Unseen"
Disclaimer: Not mine, etc.
Summary: AU set during "Sight

Comments

[jessicalynn8383]

You made me cry. I have to go read that again before I can form a better comment. You made me cry.

[cherryfeather]

Awwww! *HUGS* That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me. *pats on back* Here. Have Nathan in a bunny suit. It'll make you feel batter.

[jessicalynn8383]

Hehe I mean it in the best way, you just beautifully portrayed this moment in their relationship, getting me - as a reader - straight into their emotions. This was lovely and heartbreaking and now I want to hug them, lol.

--> "Look, Nathan, if you can't--if this doesn't--you'll take care of Zoe, right? You'll tell her--"

That's where I wanted to just sob, any mention of Jack trying to protect Zoe makes me wibble. And to me this wasn't angsty - in the bad sense - at all. It was very raw, human pathos. If this is angst, you write it with more depth than anyone else I've ever read.

I really hope you write more for this pairing. This was brilliantly done, thank you for sharing it. And for giving me hugs when I got all soppy on you. :D

[cherryfeather]

Oh, don't worry, I'll write more. You know--fic is crack, etc. etc. Thank you so much for the excellent review. :) And, to quote the Ninth Doctor, "I'll hug anybody!"

[snarkyandsparky]

Oh I loved it! I am a sucker for two things in this pairing and you did them both on one page for me :-D.

1) A vulnerable Nathan
2) Nathan and Jack on a first name basis

Loved all of it, the overall sweetness and the underlying passion.

"Not beaten. Not yet"

Well done :)

[cherryfeather]

Thank you! Vulnerable Nathan is one of my favorites as well.

[vagablonde]

That was just beautiful - heartbreaking. It's a perfect missing scene for the ep! Thank you for sharing it.

[cherryfeather]

Thanks!

[thevoiceofwrath]

I have to say that I'm with Jessie. You made me cry. In a good way, I'm sure. But, the tears running down my face don't know that. *grin* This is really beautiful. I'm glad you wrote it.

[cherryfeather]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad I had the guts to post it.

[telperion_15]

I'm gonna get in the crying thing here *sniff*

This is such a sweet take on the episode, although admittedly not where my thoughts went upon watching it. Guess I just have a sluttier mind than the rest of you!

[cherryfeather]

Thank you! (And...my mind drifted a bit that way. I just can't write it. :D)