Comments | zerodetorres: fic: dreams of starry nights

zerodetorres

fic: dreams of starry nights - glee, puck/santana, nc-17

Feb 06, 2011 19:17

Title: Dreams of Starry Nights
Author: zerodetorres
Characters: Puck/Santana
Rating: NC-17
Length: 3,088
Summary: Puck and Santana's summer adventures.

Notes: Written for snoozin81 as part of the glee_rare_pairs fic exchange (pinch hit).

( Dreams of Starry Nights )

fic: puck/santana, !fandom: glee, fic: glee

Comments 6

snoozin81 February 7 2011, 11:42:17 UTC

So worth the wait. This was absolutely perfect, highlighted everything I love about Puck and Santana's relationship.

He takes a deep breath and doesn't meet her eyes when he says, "I just need you to be easy." Immediately, he shakes his head. "Not like that." His eyes dart to hers. "We take shit from each other all the time, but-if you're not on my side in all of this, then who the fuck is?"

I can't eve begin to tell you how much I adore this one little paragraph. It's possibly the best insight into the two of the I've ever read. Great, Great, Great job. Thank you so much.

stargirl888 February 7 2011, 22:42:27 UTC

This was just perfect.

phelipa February 8 2011, 02:44:50 UTC

The fact that you are writing Puck/Santana is amazing!!! One of my favourite writers and one of my favourite ships!!
This is awesome, I love the dynamics of their relationship and how they play off each other. This is just perfect :)

rockinrye September 15 2011, 00:05:17 UTC

Gah. So good. I love two of them. Such an awesome exploration.

anonymous January 4 2012, 03:24:12 UTC

This is my first time ever posting on a LJ, and I have no idea what I'm doing, but I just wanted to say this might be the most well written drabble thing I've ever read (I know I'm a little late to the party, almost a year later). The words your have put on a page have such a fluidity, a lyrical tone to them. The whole thing evokes the small town wonders of two lost children, who manage to escape the dreariness of everyday life not so much with each other, but in each other. The story is incredibly chock full of imagery, and even I, a big city girl like me, get the wistful nostalgic sense of Midwestern, teenage Americana spirit. The ending was heartbreaking and optimistic at the same time. It was coming, but I never wanted it to end, but I knew it was inevitable, yet I was glad to see it end so beautifully. (And hey! Isn't that the exact feeling you have going on in the subject/content? What a beautiful mimicry of literary style and plot ( ... )

zerodetorres January 4 2012, 16:55:26 UTC

wow, thanks for the thorough feedback!

i'm 'somethingsdont' on ff.net, but i don't post my fics there anymore due to laziness. all my fics are archived at ao3: http://archiveofourown.org/users/nightshifted