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Jul 13, 2011 01:20

Title: See No Evil (8/?)
Author: Read more... )

fic: see no evil, fml, supernatural fic, writing is hard

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tolkien_fan195 July 13 2011, 09:19:42 UTC
Gah! Why so much hurt for Cas? T_T

However, I would like to tell you that I love your Jimmy (and the whole sibling relationship dynamics, they're wonderful). It really made my work shift more bearable.

Wonderful chapter!

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zeppx July 17 2011, 10:19:31 UTC
Because hurt for Cas is just a weakness for me. I dunno why. He's just so pretty in his pain.

I'm glad you enjoy all the sibling relationships here, as an only child I can only guess as to how it feels, so I'm glad it's enjoyable.

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thewakingsleep July 13 2011, 09:30:58 UTC
Okay, so you started the chapter off with heavy, gut-wrenching stuff and ended it with a bit of humor, which is always appreciated, especially if its after multiple rounds of awesome sex. That is what I call good strategy, not leaving your readers with a too-heavy stone in their stomachs ( ... )

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zeppx July 17 2011, 10:22:22 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I think...Dean looking into it all...will come to bite him in the ass. We'll see though. Haven't written that far ahead lol.

You'll see Gabriel's reaction and such in the next part.

Annnd...for Cas having the violent/iffy past instead of Dean, I'm sure in a future story we will have Dean with the issues, but in most of the fics I read it's Dean who has the issues and I like doing something out of the norm that isn't seen too often or whatever. But I don't want to be predictable or anything either...so Dean will have his moments.

As always, I enjoy your comments a ridiculous amount. I'm glad you enjoyed and I hope you enjoy the next part too!

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discreetmath July 13 2011, 15:54:57 UTC
This whole story, I just adore it. I especially like the relationship between Cas and Jimmy, though I hope that Jimmy can work past all of his guilt.

This is great, thank you :)

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zeppx July 17 2011, 10:22:49 UTC
I'm glad you enjoy the story, I really, really do.

Jimmy will be working through his guilt in the next part. Promise.

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jem_018 July 13 2011, 17:22:27 UTC
Poor Cas and what he went through with Lucifer. That evil bastard! :(

LOL at Gabriel and Jimmy. Those two. Hahaha. :D

Oh no. Poor Jimmy and the guilt he still feels.

great chapter. :D

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zeppx July 17 2011, 10:23:28 UTC
thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lucifer is a bit of an evil bastard yeah?

Cas will be okay though, he's got the shenanigans of Jimmy and Gabriel to look forward to.

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mulder200 July 13 2011, 18:51:14 UTC
Poor Cas! My heart aches for him.

"I once made you eat crap by telling you it was chocolate."

There was a long silence and then Dean heard Jimmy mumble, "When I need to puke, I'm doing it all over your shoes."

Ew!

And now Dean has to deal with Gabriel in the morning. Oh well.

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zeppx July 17 2011, 10:23:58 UTC
Ah, Dean will be okay. Gabriel's full of snark...not bite lol.

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