PATIENT - Chapter 21: Channeling Anger

Aug 11, 2010 14:27

Title: Patient
Author: zeppomarx
Characters: House, Wilson, Cuddy, plus the characters created for Priority’s Exigencies and zeppomarx’s A Gentle Knock at the Door.
Summary: House’s minions find a new patient, one who is reluctant to allow House to treat him. Begins three months after the opening scene of A Gentle Knock at the Door. Part of the ( Read more... )

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angelcat2865 August 11 2010, 22:14:25 UTC
Glad you are back! :)

Glad to see Tritter starting to get what he has coming to him. Love that Rainie was able to help pull House out of his funk. Great update.

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zeppomarx August 11 2010, 22:27:24 UTC
Sorry I took so long to get to this chapter... it had a glitch in it that I just couldn't seem to solve. Finally had to let it percolate for awhile.

--zep

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sstacker92 August 12 2010, 05:36:22 UTC
Yay! I understand how it feels when something is just off. I'm glad you got past it, and I thought it was a great update! I love this story and Gentle Knock. Here's to coherent ideas and active muses! Great Job. I just LOVE Rainie!

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zeppomarx August 12 2010, 17:53:22 UTC
I adore Rainie, too. She just waltzed into my head and refused to be ignored.

--zep

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lhoma320 August 16 2010, 12:54:35 UTC
I die every time I see an update from you. My summer has been so hectic. My daughter came to visit from Taiwan for 5 weeks and we've been all over the place. I kept grabbing stories here and there but hadn't had much time to read or comment. Not even sure I commented after your last update. I hope I did because these last couple of chapters have been wonderful.

I love how you are handling everyone including Rainie and Tritter.

It's been so suspenseful. I loved the way her first thought was that House killed Tritter. Like Wilson I was very surprised by Rainie's strength. Demanding to be taken to House. Poor Wilson. LOL

So many great lines.

I loved this "Boy, did I pick the wrong role model!” That really got to me. I felt so badly for House and his comeback was the best. "I’m not your fucking guidance counselor!" A perfect House line.

This chapter and the last chapter really got to me. Such great updates. I'm really loving this story. :)

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zeppomarx August 16 2010, 15:34:09 UTC
Thank you so much for this - your thoughtful comments always mean a lot to me.

As for Rainie's strength - it seemed to me that she's the type of person who, if she gets righteously angry enough, can overcome almost anything. And it's well documented that if people who are depressed can realize they are actually angry about something, it helps overcome the depression.

I'm delighted that you picked up on those particular lines. I gave myself a chuckle when I wrote them.

More soon, I hope, although the next couple of chapter really need some work.

--zep

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