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PATIENT - Chapter 16: Retribution

Apr 07, 2010 16:28

Title: Patient
Author: zeppomarx
Characters: House, Wilson, Cuddy, plus the characters created for Priority’s Exigencies and zeppomarx’s A Gentle Knock at the Door.
Summary: House’s minions find a new patient, one who is reluctant to allow House to treat him. Begins three months after the opening scene of A Gentle Knock at the Door. Part of the ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

angelcat2865 April 8 2010, 00:37:30 UTC

Poor House, I just hope he does not do anything rash.

Heartbreaking and great update!

romeo46 April 8 2010, 03:29:57 UTC

Since vomit was the word of the day- haha-

In the midst of all that angst you still have a great line like that.

Also, hurray for Joe being in the chapter. I working on a chapter right now with him.

romeo46 April 8 2010, 03:31:33 UTC

You know what? Joe is a lawyer. He did law school after the Army

zeppomarx April 8 2010, 03:49:58 UTC

Oooh. I like him being a lawyer. I'd have worded that last little bit differently if I'd thought of that.

--zep

romeo46 April 8 2010, 04:31:24 UTC

I didn't think of it at first but I was thinking that FBI agents need to be lawyers but that used to be the case not anymore. I made Joe a lawyer in Joe's Story because it seemed to be something he would do to get to the FBI.

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vimpela April 18 2010, 17:14:59 UTC

Wow!
I've just finished reading all the stuff (a gentle knock adn patient)

I felt sick reading Rainie's story in a gentle know... but now I'm so anger... Tritter is evil!!

lhoma320 April 21 2010, 02:48:17 UTC

Wow! I didn't expect this. This really broke my heart. I feel so badly for Rainie and House and Wilson. All the work they put into their place destroyed. I loved too how you referenced, at one point, the fact that House and Rainie were able to live pretty independent because of where and how they lived. Their lifes are turned inside out and upside down.

The hardest part to read was when the four thugs broke into the house while Rainie was there. There breaking her glass and how it upset her. Her hiding in the closet as they searched the house was so descriptive. It was so suspenseful. It was almost like watching a thriller. Phew!

I wonder what House will do to Tritter now. Great story line. Great update! Can't wait to read more.