Unseen, Pt 1/?

[zeppogrl7]

I'm writing a Twilight fanfic! :D here it is! lemme know what u think please!!! =D

Comments

[summer_wolf]

I will read this first thing tomorrow!! Right before I head into lab., hehe!! =D

[summer_wolf]

Ooh me likey!! This is really, really great. Seriously the characters are spot on (especially Rosalie, hehe). =D

Haha I'm surprised you put Jacob in the story though. ;)

[lysx]

That's really good :)
Please say there'll be more?
It is really very good, I think you've got me hooked :)

[zeppogrl7]

there will be more :) I'm working on chapter 2 right now

Thank u very much I'm glad you're enjoying it!

wow

[elaine9703]

i really liked it but im a litle slow is alice rosalie jasper and emmett vampiers???? and is jacob still a werewolf??? other than that i agree with Iysx you've got me hooked on your story just like in the twilight series, i got the first three books in the series done in a week!!:) (the forths not out yet were i am so i guess ill have to wait for that) but keep it up i'd love to read more!!!!

-anna

Re: wow

[zeppogrl7]

thank you so much :D i'm glad you're enjoying it :D alice, jasper, rosalie and emmett are not vampires and jacob is not a werewolf.

haha i read the first 3 books in a week, also. read new moon in one day cuz i wanted to get the missing edward parts over with. im still reading breaking dawn but i read the last page so i knew what happened.

[littleone87]

I love this! Interesting concept! I can't wait to see where you take this! I'd love to have Edward come into my house at night too. ;)

[zeppogrl7]

thank u so much :D and i totally agree on the Edward thing lol.

[ashspark]

I'm loving it... You had no idea how ecited I felt when I spotted your story at lion_lamb... I loved all your Hameron stories and I4m extreemly happy to meet you again in this fandom!

[zeppogrl7]

thanks so much hun :D im still tryin to write the house fic but since i've become obsessed with Twilight its hard for me to concentrate enough to write the house fic lol.