Torcmar snippet: Ethan in the city
I wrote over 1000 words today. It was a slow work day. I am feeling very good about that, although I'm not sure how many of the words are worth keeping.
In any case, here's a snippet from the bit. ETA: I didn't need the context, I cut it way short.
( Ethan had chosen a dreary day for this visit. The mist of early morning gradually gave way to intermittent rain showers as heavy gray clouds pushed all evidence of daylight to the east. )
In any case, here's a snippet from the bit. ETA: I didn't need the context, I cut it way short.
( Ethan had chosen a dreary day for this visit. The mist of early morning gradually gave way to intermittent rain showers as heavy gray clouds pushed all evidence of daylight to the east. )
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You need to write more of Ethan and Zeph! I always enjoy reading about them :-)
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