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rawpickles December 30 2014, 07:20:19 UTC
yamada's past is needless to say, heartbreaking.
it's sad to see him lacking the affection from both of his parents, not to mention his father's been experimenting on him.

i'm so looking forward to the next one ♥ good job!

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zeon_avalanthe December 31 2014, 01:27:29 UTC
Indeed..
He was abandoned by his parents, and later by his own brother..

Will do my best to update soon~
Thanks for dropping by~

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ghiekaye_20 December 30 2014, 08:41:44 UTC
But why did Ryosuke forget about Yuto?

And that's the reason why Yabu didn't explain anything when Yuto join them, because they already know(?) each other.

And Poor Ryosuke...

Will wait for the next part Ganbatte!!!

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zeon_avalanthe December 31 2014, 01:29:25 UTC
It was somekind of an after-effect of the device planted on him, if I have to say.. >,<

For one, that was the reason.. But it was also because Yabu-chan was told not to say anything to Ryosuke about Yuto when he came to their place..

Please do wait~
Will do my best to update soon~
Thanks for dropping by~

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tsubasa_quill December 30 2014, 13:09:05 UTC
Wow, only chapter two and i am hooked to the core <3

I loved the flow of this chapter... like the best way to execute a back story cause everything in chapter one makes perfect sense!

Awesome storytelling rei-chan! can't wait for more!! <3

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zeon_avalanthe December 31 2014, 01:32:09 UTC
Wow~ Am I really good or what ?! *shot*
Glad you like this one though~ I was sooo worried when I was about to post this fic.. >,<

Aww~ I'm being complimented by Tsubasa-sama~ I'm chooooo happy~ *glomps*

Will do my best to update soon~
Thanks for dropping by, Tsu-chan~

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tsubasa_quill January 2 2015, 08:20:27 UTC
of you are darling <3 you are an excellent writer!

no need to worry I am thoroughly enjoying this fic and always looking forward to updates!

Anytime dear :)

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zeon_avalanthe January 5 2015, 02:54:59 UTC
Aww~
I'm nowhere near, Tsu-chan~ I still have lots to work on~ >,<

Glad you enjoyed this one though~
Will do my best to update soon~ >,<
*glomps*

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ekadarmayanthi December 30 2014, 14:11:29 UTC
although i never watch or read tokyo ghoul but since this fic made by you i still can understand it..

and poor ryosuke, but i am wondering why he didn't remember yuto though hehe..

anyway thanks for update rei-chan, can't wait for the next part ^_^

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zeon_avalanthe December 31 2014, 01:36:56 UTC
Woah~ Awesome~
Glad the fic is pretty easy to understand though~ >,<

It was somekind of an after-effect of the device planted on him, which resulted in him losing some of his memory.. :D

You're welcome~
Will do my best to update soon~
And thanks for dropping by~

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alsykt December 30 2014, 14:53:02 UTC
ohmy... Ryosuke didnt even got to know Yuto's name at all, not once was his name mentioned..is that why Yuto was forgotten? i guess thats the after effect for Ryosuke.

oohh this is actually different from the actual TG and im loving it!! and i can guess about Ryosuke's device soon when he goes to save Yuto but i wont do any spoiling in case my guess ends up wrong. xD

the only shocked i had was Yamapi's age!!! lolxx

Ryosuke remember Yuto soon and also you do update soon! xP

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zeon_avalanthe December 31 2014, 01:43:07 UTC
Ah-em.. Allow me to explain..
Ryosuke knew Yuto's name when he was saved by him and started living with him.. It's just that because of the after-effect of the device planted on him that he lost some of his memories..
I made it so that Yuto's name was never mentioned just to add some excitement on the fic~ *grins*
*shot*

I took the base story and plot from TG but decided to make some alteration here and there.. When you read the next chappie, you might be reminded back to TG, so please watch out~ >,<
Fufufu~ Please feel free to guess and share the continuation of the story~ I love every deductions my readers made~ >,<

Me too was shocked at it.. But, if I were to use his real age, that would make him real old.. And considering Ryosuke's age when the incident happened, I had to make Pi to be in a place in which he was still powerless to do anything.. And thus, I made him a LOT younger than he really is.. Please imagine him in his Kurosagi's time.. He's much or less look like that in this story~ >,Yeah, Ryosuke should remember Yuto ( ... )

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