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[zenravn]

had to write a poem for a class. definitely am not going to share it in its entirety to the likes of lj, am not a poet. it is however mostly a series of haiku-like creatures. here is one that stands ok on its own

Comments

[fizgig3]

nice, ummmm but what does it mean???

[zenravn]

don't play god.... you're not hot shit or something along those lines.

[petunias_petals]

playin god? how, whom when where, whats on yer mind, me get read rest? ah, me off to p-town tonite, wish luck-vroom vroom. me no likey me, look in mirror, grrrh tones. yuck sick of curdled milk flesh. no more skin, me stay away alone in yard. clothes on. no rivers, bedroom affairs with eyes open. this shell needs overhaul, repaint the job. hi to you.

[fizgig3]

shut your face girl. you are so gorgeous! I have seen you naked for gods sake...well at least photos and you have a great body and a cute little face to go along with it.

[zenravn]

she's right. you're a cutie pie, and i have seen you naked from all the angles i could think of. i suppose you can read the poem, it no big thang though.