a haiku (or 2)

[zenravn]

just to add something:

beautiful morning
trees and sky and love and loss
beautiful mourning.

and

seven syllables
preceded by five others
followed by five more.

Comments

heres one i wrote just now for you!

[shanzig]

my ass is so cold.
you could use it to chill drinks.
shannie-colada?

Re: heres one i wrote just now for you!

[zenravn]

i am so thirsty
those ass cheeks would sell so well
in frightful deserts

[awakened_soul]

i have missed you, man.
you still live across the street?
never did stop by.

[zenravn]

apartment buildings
are much too busy and vast
to find one person

[awakened_soul]

all the way in back
little number sixty four
almost always home.

[boytiger]

Good God it is late!
Manana there is work.
Jesus Fucking Christ...

[zenravn]

NOW where do you work?
christianity abounds
in your deep haiku

2 4 U

[girl_obscured]

this day was a bitch
cock sucking motherfucker
tomorrow is love.

I am in prison
shackled and restrained land locked
my escape draws near

Re: 2 4 U

[zenravn]

i'm rooting for you
the only thing you can do:
choke that cocksucker!

imminent escape....
you can travel anywhere
i'm free on friday.

(i hope you mean escape in a spatial and not mortal kind of way darling.)

Re: 2 4 U

[girl_obscured]

oh, no. not mortal.

Re: 2 4 U

[zenravn]

ok, i feel like i know you, but not that well nor the situation at hand. had to check, tortured artists and all.