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zennie

Fic: Gambit (5/?)

Jul 20, 2008 13:28

Gambit
Fandom, Pairing: The Sarah Connor Chronicles, Sarah/Cameron
Summary: Sarah, Cameron, missile silo. Need I say more?
AN: Big thanks to inspectorboxer who as usual supplied excellent comments and help during the writing of this part. ralst demanded the fic supplied the prompt and grumpybear1031 created the cool comic-book-style cover. The lame banner is my own invention.
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fic: sarah connor chronicles

Comments 52

inspectorboxer July 20 2008, 18:11:09 UTC

I still hold my breath every time I read this. What a rollar coaster ride this one is going to be. Can't wait for the next twists and turns.

You're brilliant. Have I told you that lately? ;)

zennie July 20 2008, 18:19:50 UTC

You are too kind. But I'm glad the suspense works. And yeah, more twists and turns are forthcoming, as you well know.

lena_fan July 20 2008, 18:28:03 UTC

Wow can't wait for more, this is incredible, I love it xxx

zennie July 20 2008, 23:59:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad and I hope it's enough for you in lieu of an IM&Y fic.

driftlight23 July 20 2008, 18:39:37 UTC

I love how you've caught Sarah's paranoia and utter determination. Really enjoying this story. Clearly a great week for fic! :)

zennie July 21 2008, 00:02:48 UTC

Thanks, I appreciate it. I wasn't sure if I quite managed to convey Sarah's rather messed up mental state. I figured she would flip when she found out about Cam's betrayal, but I wasn't sure if Sarah wouldn't calm down and talk to her except for that insane paranoia that we saw in T2.

Nice intense Sarah icon, btw.

driftlight23 July 21 2008, 06:29:03 UTC

I think that Sarah icon's gonna get a lot of use in the new season. :D

What I like about Lena's portrayal is that the extremism is always lurking. Even if she has calmed down a great deal since the events of T2, it's never really gone away and it just needs the right trigger. You caught that well - I could see her very clearly.

zennie July 21 2008, 10:55:06 UTC

I like your reading of Lena's Sarah, and it is spot-on. She had to be less crazy to live in the world, but that doesn't mean it's not still a part of her. It's just beneath the surface, subdued but ready.

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zennie July 21 2008, 00:05:38 UTC

Ah, don't worry. The next part is the twisty-turny downhill from the peak.

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zennie July 21 2008, 00:06:48 UTC

*g* Now that might be fun. Except for the smashing her. Poor Cam doesn't know her own strength.