fabulous! although the premise is whimsical and cute, this totally works with the darker winchester world because you've written moira so well. loved how dean's voice changes a little in each time frame, but is still fundamentally the same. the thing that seems to change the most is his relationship with sam. which is kind of a cool measure of maturity. well done. :)
Thank you! Yeah, I feel like I took something that would've fitted better in a fairy tale, and then Winchesters came along with their grit and dirtied it all up a bit. ;)
i have three interests listed, too. i have no idea what the fuck i'm supposed to do with this thing.
an insult? how? don't make me urban dictionary your ass.
aw, you bitch.
wait, i got it:
A negative reference to a female character commonly used by beginning writers in their Fan-fiction.
Most times, the "Mary-Sue" is based upon the author. She is unusually perfect and more advanced, also befriends or becomes romantically entangled with the author's favorite character/characters from the series. Because she is more superior than the other characters in the work, she mainly becomes the focus of the fan-fiction, thus ruining whatever the fan-fiction was about.
As stated above, the name of the character referred to as the "Mary-Sue" does not matter.
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A female character who is so perfect that she is annoying. The name originated in a very short Star Trek story that mocked the sort of female characters who showed up in fanfiction. It usually refers to original female characters put into fanfiction, but can refer to any character
( ... )
I'm not gonna get into shit with an anonymous commenter. Really though, you're a dick. None of my OC's are so perfect that they are annoying. Nor are they based on me or extraordinarily gorgeous, amazingly talented, unusually powerful, or exceedingly attractive.
It's really fucking irritating, now that you've got me thinking about it. I don't care for Moira as much as I do for some of the others, so it wasn't so bad here, but it COULD have been very upsetting for me, you insensitive jerk.
I mean, they ALL have a bit of me in them. Even other peoples characters, how's it an original, individual story without personal traits from the author.
What'd you think anyway? I'm writing Sam/Dean incest right now. But Dean's in a girl-body for most of it. You'll love it, won't ya?
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well done. :)
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I'm pleased you liked.
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I'm happy it could be of service to you this fine Saturday. :)
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Some people are just plain morons weird. *squeezes*
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Yeah. Fuck you too, buddy.
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Mistress of Words but apparently a big old doofus when it comes to this internet thing...
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so..what's a Mary-Sue alert?
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Very creative username, there. You sly genius, you. You can get yer own userpics in future though, ass.
*sigh* Mary-Sue. I guess she's an insult. I'd forgotten about that comment actually, I might delete it.
Uh. I'm not friending you back, BTW. You think I was born yesterday?
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an insult? how? don't make me urban dictionary your ass.
aw, you bitch.
wait, i got it:
A negative reference to a female character
commonly used by beginning writers in their Fan-fiction.
Most times, the "Mary-Sue" is based upon the author.
She is unusually perfect and more advanced, also befriends
or becomes romantically entangled with the author's favorite
character/characters from the series. Because she is more
superior than the other characters in the work, she mainly
becomes the focus of the fan-fiction, thus ruining whatever
the fan-fiction was about.
As stated above, the name of the character referred to as
the "Mary-Sue" does not matter.
OR
A female character who is so perfect that she is annoying. The name originated in a very short Star Trek story that mocked the sort of female characters who showed up in fanfiction. It usually refers to original female characters put into fanfiction, but can refer to any character ( ... )
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I'm not gonna get into shit with an anonymous commenter. Really though, you're a dick. None of my OC's are so perfect that they are annoying. Nor are they based on me or extraordinarily gorgeous, amazingly talented, unusually powerful, or exceedingly attractive.
It's really fucking irritating, now that you've got me thinking about it. I don't care for Moira as much as I do for some of the others, so it wasn't so bad here, but it COULD have been very upsetting for me, you insensitive jerk.
I mean, they ALL have a bit of me in them. Even other peoples characters, how's it an original, individual story without personal traits from the author.
What'd you think anyway? I'm writing Sam/Dean incest right now. But Dean's in a girl-body for most of it. You'll love it, won't ya?
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