SPN fic -- Sugar No Ingredients.

[zelost_mind]

title: Sugar No Ingredients
rating: Adult
status: Complete. 5,771 words.

a/n: Sam/Dean. Het. Incest. Slightly AU. Mostly Pre-series.

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Comments

[goodnightbert]

This was such a well-done story, because it was hot, but also a little uncomfortable in a way that some Wincest stories aren't. I mean that in a good way - the situation *should* be uncomfortable, and Sam was fairly manipulative, so it added a layer of discomfort to the story. But so good, the slow build to the inevitable. The first scene with the earrings is a perfect way to introduce this version of Sam...a little selfish, headstrong, and Dean even then taking care of her. Excellent job.

[zelost_mind]

Wow, thank you.

I'm glad you mentioned the uncomfortableness, 'cause I know I was uncomfortable writing it at some points and was kinda hoping it would come across, that this isn't a fairy tale, y'know?

Thanks again.

[nekare]

Oh, loved this! I'm not usually a fan of girl!Sam, but this one was so well built - stubborn and manipulative and kinda awesome. It does feel inevitable, them being together, and you wrote them both in such a scorching hot way, oh my!

[zelost_mind]

Eeek! I'm happy you liked.

You know, I think I'm more of a fan of girl!Sam, when he's been a boy!Sam who's been turned into a girl, and it's not permanent? I kinda like boy!Sam just the way he is most of the time, too :}

Thanks for taking the time to lemme know what you thought.

[quellefromage]

Special hell welcomes it's newest inhabitant!! Hetcest. Lordy. Like this feisty Sam. And John is just as dense as ever. And...oh, Dean...special hell is waiting for you, too.

Nicely done.

[zelost_mind]

God, I know. What was I thinking? Fandom has warped my brain.

Oh well. Cheers! So what do you all do for fun down here? Fancy dress parties? Pin the tail on the donkey?...Bobbing for apples?

[braveinnewworld]

YOU made me read WINCEST! Lol. Usually I'm more of a gen person but I loved your other stories so much I thought I'd give it a try. And I have to admit that I really, really liked it. I think, because Dean actually does think about the wrongness of everything, because they don't just go for it without any concerns. Also, I loved your girl-Sam and how the dynamics between Dean and her shift because of the fact she's female.

So yeah, great work! And now I'll have to go hide out somewhere because, dude, I just read Wincest and liked it! *a tiny bit traumatized*

[zelost_mind]

Eeek! Sorry! Don't look! Don't look! Aw, damn. Too late...;}

Thank you for taking the chance, it's a huge compliment that you did.

You know she was very nearly not only a girl, but an evil!girl!Sam? I chopped the parts where she kills lots of people off the end, that definitely would have been too much crazyness for one fic.

You're traumatized? I know the feeling, I still can't believe I wrote HET INCEST. Anyway, thanks again, for letting me know what you thought, it's appreciated :}

[braveinnewworld]

evil!girl!Sam? Yeah, that coulda been a bit too much ... then again, you're writing about Dean taking platonic baths with mysteriously winged females of undefined species ... so who knows, it's entirely possible you could make it work :D

[zelost_mind]

then again, you're writing about Dean taking platonic baths with mysteriously winged females of undefined species ...

*beams* Have I told you lately that I love you? ;}

[astrothsknot]

that was deliciously, beautifully fucked up

[zelost_mind]

Why, thank you kindly...I think :}