Homework: Another scene from CMW (page 1 of 4)

[zelempa]

By popular demand (thanks, two people who voted!), I'm doing more of Chicago's Most Wanted by Speranza as my final project. It is to be four pages. I chose a scene from the middle

Comments

[alex51324]

Ooh, nice! Things I like: 1. How the strap across Fraser's chest in panel 4 echoes his Sam Browne belt, 2. Ray's hand in that same panel 3. the security camera in panel three, 4. Fraser's open collar in panel 5.

[zelempa]

Thanks! I love comments in specific list format :)

1. omg I didn't notice that except possibly subconsciously.
2. yay!
3. Glad it was recognizable as a security camera! inking was kind of sloppy there.
4. I know right we never see Fraser's neck!

[alex51324]

I wondered about the first one...but as you've heard me say many times, authorial intent doesn't trump all, so it still totally counts. :)

[zelempa]

:) Yeah, no, I love it. I'm glad you mentioned it so I can make sure to have it in the future pages, too.

(And I'll probably redo this one... got some good ideas in class tonight.)

[mamaffy]

Awesome! I like the atmosphere in the dark stairwell and the GTO and Ray's experimental hair and sneaky Fraser. Now, I want to reread this story.

Is is bad that I want you to get plenty of homework? Ahem. Good luck in class. ;)

[zelempa]

Rereading this story is always a good idea. :) I'm glad you like the page.

This is my final project, so there will be three more pages of this scene and then no more homework! But my just-for-fun art may well be more of same... just at a less consistent pace.