Comments | zeldaophelia: FIC: Just friends. Really.

zeldaophelia

FIC: Just friends. Really.

Jan 28, 2006 17:56

Title: Just friends. Really.
Pairing: Neville Longbottom/Susan Bones
Rating: PG-13
Author: Zelda Ophelia
Word count: 1508
Summary: Neville never understood why his housemates had a hard time believing they were just friends.
Notes: Based on the FA OTP Generator challenge (this wasn't one of my first three, instead one I got when I went back later) ( Read more... )

fanfic100: susan bones, fic: harry potter, fic, book: harry potter

Comments 8

bayushi January 28 2006, 23:24:13 UTC

A friend pointed me at this story, as I'm a Susan Bones fan.

Oh. Oh, my. THANK you, that was wonderful! I think I need a cold shower, now.

bribitribbit January 28 2006, 23:51:30 UTC

I've been looking for some Neville/Susan forEVER! I'm so glad you've written this! I love it--it's adorable, and I particularly love Susan's character. And I love the beginning and end. Just--so adorable!

tunxeh January 29 2006, 04:41:13 UTC

Cute one.

quivo January 29 2006, 04:49:04 UTC

That. Is. So. Beautifull! I don't ship this ship or even think about it more than occasionally, but I just had to say that this story perfectly captures all my feelings about how reluctant!Neville should be written. I love the way he practically stumbles over his words when he's talking about her, and how he doesn't bother overthinking anything - it's well characterised, and it's also easy to believe Susan is how he says she is. Thanks for sharing this!!!

snorkackcatcher January 29 2006, 09:18:19 UTC

Heh. Nice and fluffy -- I like the way Neville keeps losing his thread as he gets distracted, and it makes a pleasant change to see a Susan-fic.