Ghosts Of The Abyss: Chapter 24

May 27, 2011 19:48

ZeldaQueen: In which Gethesemane rips off more canon. We have a short act here, so out comes Link and onto the stage we go!

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chapter 24, suethor: gethesemane butler, fic: ghosts of the abyss

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carakasla May 28 2011, 00:55:08 UTC
Wah, wah, wah, how stupid is this bitch? Seriously? When does the fizzling out happen? This is getting so boring, I'm starting to skim for your comments.

Really though? 'Our kind'? I should write a spite-fic of my characters kicking Kate's ass! And I would but my characters have better things to do...like take baths. Stinky bastards.

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morri_delrae May 28 2011, 11:19:40 UTC
This is probably the most face-palm-y chapter thus far. I'd already thought that nothing from Gethsemane could faze me and then the world decided to prove me wrong. Hoo boy, did it ever.

"Out of my way, boy," came a deep, gruff voice from behind Jack and me.

So much for Keith Richards's awesomeness and his kick-ass first scene. Shooting a man from a dark corner and rasping: "The code is the law" was clearly not enough - Gethsemane decided that pushing through the crowd and grumbling at his son would make for a much more dramatic entrace.

their own democracies aboard their ships

I... this... I have no words. Really, none. Gethsemane seems to believe that pirate ships operated under democratic principles. I can't even start pointing out the million things that are wrong with this picture, because the sheer amount of fail required to come up with such a belief has rendered me temporarily incapacitated.

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southerngaelic May 28 2011, 16:20:40 UTC
Gethsemane, you're the stupidest person alive. Democracy? On a pirate ship?

I want Teague to look at the Sue and think "Hmm. It's time me old lady met the new in-laws," and then decapitate her so she can keep Jack's mother company :)

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mogseltof May 28 2011, 18:40:41 UTC
About the only thing I'm really noticing now is how OOC it seems when Jack says canon (or mutilated canon at any rate) lines. :S

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parrinoyed May 29 2011, 21:33:40 UTC
ZeldaQueen: (Kate) "I'm totally a Pirate Lord you know. Not Elizabeth, me. I'm hotter and awesome than she could ever be!"

I nearly gasped aloud upon his mention of that murdering heathen's name

I've never been threatened by the existence of a fictional character before--annoyed, but not threatened. I cannot understand this mindset. It's so odd. ???

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zelda_queen June 1 2011, 01:24:17 UTC
It's rather frightening, especially when you consider that Gethesemane apparently believes that she's married to Gerard Butler...

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