Are the chapters really this... tiny? I mean, I'm not complaining, but still. These chapters are nothing more than a few empty words strung together with maybe one or two sentences in between that actually bear relevance to the plot (or lack, thereof)!
You know, I reflected on some of my "loved one is dead" dreams, and I don't recall ever having one where I watched the deed happen--just was going around mourning and with a vacancy in my heart, knowing that the death had happened. It bothered me so intensely that I couldn't describe any of it to Murky, a strangled "you were gone" and that was it. And then I was insecure for the rest of the day.
I'm not saying that this is how everyone would or should react, but why I find Gethsuemane's account here too shallow.
I've had dreams like that as well. Ones where my dad or brother or mom has died and sometimes my dream self doesn't even know why, just that they are dead, and nothing makes me happier than to wake up and find out it isn't true.
That up there that Gethesemane wrote, that's just about the most cliched thing ever. There's no love, just her repeating how needed and beloved her stupid Sue is. >:(
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Oh, balls :(
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Come to think of it though, where are Elizabeth and Will? She hasn't mentioned either of them in a few chapters.
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I'm not saying that this is how everyone would or should react, but why I find Gethsuemane's account here too shallow.
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That up there that Gethesemane wrote, that's just about the most cliched thing ever. There's no love, just her repeating how needed and beloved her stupid Sue is. >:(
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