Heart Of The Sea: Chapter 6 - Marked

[zelda_queen]

ZeldaQueen: I have to say, I'm rather confuzzled on the order of events here. Apparently they've gone to Tortuga for no reason at all, before heading back out to sea? I don't know

Comments

[southerngaelic]

Oh, FUCK.

Even when she's reciting lines from the movie, her horribly clunky writing STILL MAKES THEM SHIT.

And of COURSE Jonesy is gonna take her soul. She's...well, I won't spoil it for anyone.

[kawaiicow]

Tentacle rape ahoy?

[southerngaelic]

Something like that. Also: barnacles x-x

[zelda_queen]

O_o I suspected as much. Mervin laid claim to that, and I'm grateful.

[detritius]

This is the laziest writing I've ever seen. It's just the scene from the movie, with vapid Sue commentary! I mean, this Suethor is always terrible, but usually she at least makes an effort to make her Sue part of what so-called story there is, instead of just standing around watching the movie and thinking about how clever she is.

[zelda_queen]

It's like Rose Potter, but without the narm. -_-