Small grammar error
anonymous
November 3 2011, 23:04:26 UTC
I'm a Kingdom Hearts junkie and the Axel fanboy in me couldn't let this go. You spelled it "Charkams" when it is, in fact, spelled "Chakrams." Just switch the K and R around, if you're one of those people who don't notice spelling errors if all the lterets are in the wrod but the fsrit and lsat lterets are in the crcoret pcale.
If you couldn't read that, you probably noticed the spelling mistake the first time.
Oh, and on another note, I do apologize for all the anonymous comments lately. I do have an account (Rytex or Raetekusu (I forget which one) of The Daily Insanity) but my Google app on my iTouch keeps crashing when I try to log in.
This Sue's rating on the Litmus Test(http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm), is 176. On the site's score sheet, that means the character is either so Sueish that it's impossible to save it, or the tester did the test wrong. And I've used the test correctly several times.
Actually, I think it said somewhere in one of Link's Queen's spin-off oneshots (the one where Ruto is angsting about how Link married Jenna) that Jenna is brown-haired. Ruto's method of insulting Jenna is "that brown-haired woman." ...Yeah, apparently Link's Queen can't bear to have /one/ character come up with at least a half-decent insult for her self-insert.
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If you couldn't read that, you probably noticed the spelling mistake the first time.
Oh, and on another note, I do apologize for all the anonymous comments lately. I do have an account (Rytex or Raetekusu (I forget which one) of The Daily Insanity) but my Google app on my iTouch keeps crashing when I try to log in.
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Also, you did an excellent job on this entry :)
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And thank you! :)
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...Yeah, apparently Link's Queen can't bear to have /one/ character come up with at least a half-decent insult for her self-insert.
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