Crescendo: Chapter 14 (Part 1)

Feb 23, 2014 22:16

ZeldaQueen: *cheerfully* Well, it's certainly been some time, hasn't it? How about we continue on, through the never-ending fail?
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book 2, chapter 14, part 1, suethor: becca fitzpatrick, fic: crescendo, series: hush hush

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carakasla February 24 2014, 04:29:17 UTC
So, I asked my boyfriend what he would do if he was in Scott's situation. If he would still have sex with Nora after all that.

His answer was: Only if I was an idiot.

So, entirely possible for men to not think with their dicks all the time. Most of the time but not all the time.

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stormswift February 24 2014, 13:56:22 UTC
And not once is it brought up that Scott is probably too drunk to consent.

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illyriasacolyte March 12 2014, 02:58:51 UTC
Probably because Scott was the instigator in this case, though That is, of course, no excuse. I've actually spoken with a few victims of female-on-male rape who are only such because of exactly this situation.

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anonymous February 24 2014, 17:08:39 UTC
"The carpet smells like dog urine and the bathroom ceiling has mold"

I'm pretty sure most teenagers would say "piss" instead of "urine".

Weren't you just missing him?

Like head lice.

“Having fun?”

Patch: No. I already had fun once. It was horrible.

Either Fitzpatrick forgot about all of that, or these two idiots are so crazy, they find a teenage breakup to be more traumatizing than multiple attempted murders

Or he's just being a manipulative asshat.

And now, back to the sporking.

Why is the text so small after that point?

Suddenly, when Patch is there to get jealous, you're happy to make out with Scott.

This is like some bizarre inversion of Bella only being able to remember Jacob when Edward's not around.

You don't want to be here. Not with him”. (Still saving it). Nora tells him to butt out and not make that call.

Oh God. He's right about her not really wanting to be there, but she's just as right about it not being his call to make. I think I'll just settle on hating them both.

Speaking of, let's have a look at how ( ... )

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zelda_queen March 10 2014, 23:13:57 UTC
"I'm pretty sure most teenagers would say "piss" instead of "urine"."

I think so too, especially considered how loopy he was.

"Why is the text so small after that point?"

Ah, I wrote from that point on in a Word doc during my lunch breaks, to keep things moving along. ^^; I think it's all fixed now, though. Sorry!

"Oh God. He's right about her not really wanting to be there, but she's just as right about it not being his call to make. I think I'll just settle on hating them both."

Good idea. Those two are really both horrible, aren't they? Nora uses a drunk guy to get revenge on Patch, and Patch uses said drunk guy as a punching bag to make a point to Nora.

"I think you left off an "e"."

Fixed! Thanks again! ^^;

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anonymous February 25 2014, 12:12:08 UTC
Glad to see this continued, I thought you were gone for good.

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zelda_queen February 26 2014, 00:21:19 UTC
Nope! Sorry this took so long. It was just so frigging BORING. ^^; But I promise, this is still going forward! :D

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anonymous February 26 2014, 20:55:33 UTC
it will be the first of many things to break
Oh yeah, Patch, that's such a threat to give to a DRUNK GUY. With such badassery, you can take on a man in a wheelchair next. Geez, I want something to eat you.

-Dragonturtle Monk

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zelda_queen February 26 2014, 23:40:31 UTC
I know. He really is Edward 2.0, isn't he? Surely Hell must be TERRIBLE, if this badass won't talk about it!

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