Crescendo: Chapter 11 (Part 2)

Apr 20, 2013 10:45


ZeldaQueen: And lo, we see how this all can become even dumber!
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book 2, suethor: becca fitzpatrick, chapter 11, fic: crescendo, series: hush hush, part 2

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lilyxlightning April 21 2013, 02:47:16 UTC
"So what I want to know is what's Basso's reason?"

Moronic non sequiters? Then again, Basso is a massive fan of those himself.

I find it extremely amusing that the drug's effects on Nora kick in when she has to walk in a line. It's a blatant attempt for drama, except Fitzpatrick completely disregards the drug when it would have made sense for it to be a cause of drama-it doesn't even faze her when she's escaping from the school ( ... )

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parrinoyed April 22 2013, 03:19:46 UTC
"But what really makes it is the mythological Ecanus's dominion: writing. Fitzpatrick used the name of an angel of writers as part of a massive cliché for a horribly-written character."

I just saw that. If the payoff for this 'clue' isn't for two books, why the angel of writers? I cannot imagine what she's going for with this.

Also, with Basso, he wrote the ticket, gave it to her, and then offered to take it back? I was under the impression that once a ticket has been given, it can't be taken back. It should already be too late at that point.

That whole scene is nonsensical; not one thing follows the other.

Zelda, I don't know how you do it. I couldn't even finish CoA. :(

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thecuriouskitty April 22 2013, 09:11:19 UTC
Detective Basso is certainly a nasty piece of work, but his actions make sense to me. My reading is this ( ... )

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Typo anonymous April 22 2013, 18:04:31 UTC
I think it's supposed to be "little to no" not "little to know".

Also, that name is worse than some of Meyer's subtle forshadowing.

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Re: Typo zelda_queen May 19 2013, 01:48:47 UTC
You're right, and I fixed it. Thanks! :D

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