Marked: Chapter 25
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Chapter 25
ZeldaQueen: We start off with Zoey telling us how "The next day started with what I looked back on later as suspicious normalcy", which is fine and dandy except for the fact that - and I feel I cannot stress this enough - she has been there for FOUR DAYS!!! What the fuck is "normalcy"? We haven't been given the slightest clue as to what a normal routine is for her! We're also beat over the head with how Aphrodite and her cronies aren't around and how Vamp Sociology is just so interesting that Zoey has completely forgotten about the ritual with them that she has. You know, this timeline is so cramped that I'm feeling claustrophobic.
We're also told how Zoey has chosen a monologue from The Taming of the Shrew for her Drama class. I'm...really, really hoping that that's not supposed to be another "romantic" Shakespeare reference, because after Othello and Romeo and Juliet, this is just getting rather squicky. Zoey mentions that she has loved The Taming of the Shrew since she saw the movie with Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton, which explains a bit if we're supposed to see it as romantic (Burton did make the movie with the idea that Kate and Petruchio really did love each other).
There's a totally random mention of Neferet asking if Zoey had read any of her Advanced Vamp Sociology textbook and how she is very disappointed to learn that Zoey had not. You know, the textbook she got yesterday. Are the Cast ladies aware of how screwy this timeline is? Anyway, Zoey meets Stevie Rae and Damien her her Lit class, and that's when the "normalcy" is ruined. You see, they're all sitting and listening to the teacher reading from A Night to Remember, when Elliot (remember him?) starts to cough. Zoey's immediate response is to be annoyed and wonder why he doesn't get a glass of water. She then realizes that his coughing is wet and she's smelling something sweet and finally notices that there's blood splattered all over Elliot's desk.
Elliot is clearly freaked out by this and the teacher shouts for someone to get Neferet as she scrambles for a towel. She gets the towel under his mouth and by now, he has blood coming out of his nose, ears, and eyes. He is clearly upset and shouts how he doesn't want to die. The teacher strokes his hair and tries to calm him down, and Zoey has the audacity to refer to his voice as "whiny".
By this point, Neferet comes in, along with the Dragon and two other male vampires. They have with them a stretcher and some milky liquid, which is given to him to numb the pain. Elliot asks if they'll stay with him as he dies and if they'll contact his parents. Neferet agrees to both, and they load him onto the stretcher and carry him away.
I've really got to say that this entire bit? This has got to be the best writing I've seen in the book. It really was easy to feel sorry for Elliot, I could feel how scared everyone was, and actually had emotion in it.
Everything temporarily comes to a screeching halt as Neferet delivers a long speech to the class about how she won't lie to them and any of them could drop over dead at any point in time and that they'd best live like each day could be their last because it damned well could be. After she leaves, the Lit teacher mops up the blood and then goes back to reading the chapter she was on, like nothing happened. Zoey is left rather shell-shocked and trying to recover from it all. Like I said, this was written very well and I'm scratching my head and wondering why this wasn't the main source of conflict.
We get a time jump to lunch, where we're told how it's unusual for fledglings to die so close together and that everyone is all sad and quiet. Stevie Rae and Zoey leave for their dorms early, and talk about it. And any and all credit for good writing goes down the tubes as they do nothing but talk about how absolutely no one liked Elliot which makes it so much harder, because with the likable Elizabeth, at least one could honestly feel sorry for the death. I guess Elliot was just one of those universally-hated guys. Zoey outright admits that she's more upset that she saw the death than the fact that some poor kid just died in his teens. These people are very unpleasant. Zoey also spends more time angsting about the fact that Elliot's puked-up blood smelled tasty and whether or not her friends would accept her with her bloodlust.
They bring up the Samhain ritual that evening and Zoey wonders if it will be canceled without the "refrigerator". Incidentally, Zoey puts together that Elliot was probably starting to reject the change at the last ritual, and she still thinks the kid was stupid and gross. Anyway, Stevie Rae says that they don't care who they get, so they'll just grab whoever. She then says that Zoey probably shouldn't go to the ritual because Aphrodite will do all in her power to make Zoey feel unwelcome. Keep that in mind for later, ladies and gentlemen. For now, Zoey just says that she's going no matter what.
Stevie Rae's next suggestion is that Zoey bring her (Stevie Rae) along as a guest, since members of the Dark Daughters can invite people along. Zoey says no, that's not a good idea. Anyway, Erik's there to watch her back. Stevie Rae says that he might not be able to stand up to Aphrodite, as they used to go out. Geez, they just aren't letting him live that down, are they? Incidentally, all of these claims that Erik could have trouble standing up to his ex-girlfriend? They might carry more weight if we actually had some scenes with him having trouble standing up to his ex-girlfriend!
The conversation is interrupted as Zoey realizes that her cell phone is buzzing. Apparently she has a shitload of messages and texts and never noticed at all. They are all from Heath, and are in this vein
"Zo call me I stl luv u
Zo call me plz
Got 2 see u
U & Me
Will u call?
I wnt 2 talk 2 u Zo!
Call me bak"
ZeldaQueen: Good lord, even when he's texting, he comes across as drunk!
Zoey sighs and says that this obsession is why she dumped him. Normally this wouldn't warrant much notice from me, except for two things.
First of all, she didn't seem that bothered when she was pitching a fit over the thought of Kayla dating him. I guess that weird, stalkery obsession just doesn't bother her if it looks like someone else might want him.
Second of all, I know for a fact that she still considers him a boyfriend of sorts to her in later books. So all of this talk about how she's dumped him because he's creepy and obsessive is rather meaningless.
Zoey says that she's got to see Neferet about this. She pointedly avoids mentioning the fact that she's worried he imprinted on her, because she doesn't want Stevie Rae to know. Stevie Rae comes to the rather reasonable explanation that Zoey is bothered by what is clearly unhealthily obsessive behavior and comments "It'd be bad if he ran into Erik". And there we end
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Chapter 25
ZeldaQueen: We start off with Zoey telling us how "The next day started with what I looked back on later as suspicious normalcy", which is fine and dandy except for the fact that - and I feel I cannot stress this enough - she has been there for FOUR DAYS!!! What the fuck is "normalcy"? We haven't been given the slightest clue as to what a normal routine is for her! We're also beat over the head with how Aphrodite and her cronies aren't around and how Vamp Sociology is just so interesting that Zoey has completely forgotten about the ritual with them that she has. You know, this timeline is so cramped that I'm feeling claustrophobic.
We're also told how Zoey has chosen a monologue from The Taming of the Shrew for her Drama class. I'm...really, really hoping that that's not supposed to be another "romantic" Shakespeare reference, because after Othello and Romeo and Juliet, this is just getting rather squicky. Zoey mentions that she has loved The Taming of the Shrew since she saw the movie with Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton, which explains a bit if we're supposed to see it as romantic (Burton did make the movie with the idea that Kate and Petruchio really did love each other).
There's a totally random mention of Neferet asking if Zoey had read any of her Advanced Vamp Sociology textbook and how she is very disappointed to learn that Zoey had not. You know, the textbook she got yesterday. Are the Cast ladies aware of how screwy this timeline is? Anyway, Zoey meets Stevie Rae and Damien her her Lit class, and that's when the "normalcy" is ruined. You see, they're all sitting and listening to the teacher reading from A Night to Remember, when Elliot (remember him?) starts to cough. Zoey's immediate response is to be annoyed and wonder why he doesn't get a glass of water. She then realizes that his coughing is wet and she's smelling something sweet and finally notices that there's blood splattered all over Elliot's desk.
Elliot is clearly freaked out by this and the teacher shouts for someone to get Neferet as she scrambles for a towel. She gets the towel under his mouth and by now, he has blood coming out of his nose, ears, and eyes. He is clearly upset and shouts how he doesn't want to die. The teacher strokes his hair and tries to calm him down, and Zoey has the audacity to refer to his voice as "whiny".
By this point, Neferet comes in, along with the Dragon and two other male vampires. They have with them a stretcher and some milky liquid, which is given to him to numb the pain. Elliot asks if they'll stay with him as he dies and if they'll contact his parents. Neferet agrees to both, and they load him onto the stretcher and carry him away.
I've really got to say that this entire bit? This has got to be the best writing I've seen in the book. It really was easy to feel sorry for Elliot, I could feel how scared everyone was, and actually had emotion in it.
Everything temporarily comes to a screeching halt as Neferet delivers a long speech to the class about how she won't lie to them and any of them could drop over dead at any point in time and that they'd best live like each day could be their last because it damned well could be. After she leaves, the Lit teacher mops up the blood and then goes back to reading the chapter she was on, like nothing happened. Zoey is left rather shell-shocked and trying to recover from it all. Like I said, this was written very well and I'm scratching my head and wondering why this wasn't the main source of conflict.
We get a time jump to lunch, where we're told how it's unusual for fledglings to die so close together and that everyone is all sad and quiet. Stevie Rae and Zoey leave for their dorms early, and talk about it. And any and all credit for good writing goes down the tubes as they do nothing but talk about how absolutely no one liked Elliot which makes it so much harder, because with the likable Elizabeth, at least one could honestly feel sorry for the death. I guess Elliot was just one of those universally-hated guys. Zoey outright admits that she's more upset that she saw the death than the fact that some poor kid just died in his teens. These people are very unpleasant. Zoey also spends more time angsting about the fact that Elliot's puked-up blood smelled tasty and whether or not her friends would accept her with her bloodlust.
They bring up the Samhain ritual that evening and Zoey wonders if it will be canceled without the "refrigerator". Incidentally, Zoey puts together that Elliot was probably starting to reject the change at the last ritual, and she still thinks the kid was stupid and gross. Anyway, Stevie Rae says that they don't care who they get, so they'll just grab whoever. She then says that Zoey probably shouldn't go to the ritual because Aphrodite will do all in her power to make Zoey feel unwelcome. Keep that in mind for later, ladies and gentlemen. For now, Zoey just says that she's going no matter what.
Stevie Rae's next suggestion is that Zoey bring her (Stevie Rae) along as a guest, since members of the Dark Daughters can invite people along. Zoey says no, that's not a good idea. Anyway, Erik's there to watch her back. Stevie Rae says that he might not be able to stand up to Aphrodite, as they used to go out. Geez, they just aren't letting him live that down, are they? Incidentally, all of these claims that Erik could have trouble standing up to his ex-girlfriend? They might carry more weight if we actually had some scenes with him having trouble standing up to his ex-girlfriend!
The conversation is interrupted as Zoey realizes that her cell phone is buzzing. Apparently she has a shitload of messages and texts and never noticed at all. They are all from Heath, and are in this vein
"Zo call me I stl luv u
Zo call me plz
Got 2 see u
U & Me
Will u call?
I wnt 2 talk 2 u Zo!
Call me bak"
ZeldaQueen: Good lord, even when he's texting, he comes across as drunk!
Zoey sighs and says that this obsession is why she dumped him. Normally this wouldn't warrant much notice from me, except for two things.
First of all, she didn't seem that bothered when she was pitching a fit over the thought of Kayla dating him. I guess that weird, stalkery obsession just doesn't bother her if it looks like someone else might want him.
Second of all, I know for a fact that she still considers him a boyfriend of sorts to her in later books. So all of this talk about how she's dumped him because he's creepy and obsessive is rather meaningless.
Zoey says that she's got to see Neferet about this. She pointedly avoids mentioning the fact that she's worried he imprinted on her, because she doesn't want Stevie Rae to know. Stevie Rae comes to the rather reasonable explanation that Zoey is bothered by what is clearly unhealthily obsessive behavior and comments "It'd be bad if he ran into Erik". And there we end
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