14/14: Blackness

[zeitgeistic]

Title: Black, in the Smothering Dark
Chapter Title: Blackness 14/14
Words (this chapter): 8,630
Rating (this chapter): NC-17
Story Info/All Chapters: HERE
Author's Notes: This is the last chapter of part one. I'll begin posting part two in about two weeks. Beta’d by maybe_someday8 and amelancholykiss. (Possibly the best betas in the world.)

Comments

[french_chipmunk]

Yay!! A new chapter just before bed...what could be better? I may have mentioned it several times, but...I love this story. It is truly awesome.
Two weeks until the next one...I can wait...maybe... :-)
And we see Draco! Excellent, I do love it.

[zeitgeistic]

Glad you're excited. Makes me excited, too! XD

[bruises_heal]

hey
its brilliant, i loved it - i kind of severly disturbed myself by reading ginger instead of ginny at a horrible horrible moment to get the 2 confused. *shudder*
its great though, well written as usual great story line, i loved the ending - it was brilliant - cant wait for the next one, when will it be out? are we waiting long for it? please say were not?!!! xxx

[zeitgeistic]

Ahahaha! Srsly? Ginger/Ginny? I admit I confused it myself once...when I was typing everything up, I actually wrote Ginger with Harry instead of Ginny. Gross. Give it about two weeks before the next one's up... Or less than two weeks by now.

[bruises_heal]

seriously! i was like noooooo! thats a house elf! please dont tell me your going to make something about house elves 'helping' their masters in that way! i almost felt sick n then then i read down n you'd written ginny again, and i looked up n saw my mistake n breathed easier again! loving it, cant wait till the next one, got loasds of assignments at the mo but im trying to keep on top of my fic habbit lol! it gets me away from the 3000 words i should be writing about now lol! love x

[hun_yaoi_hun]

i never would of guest rowena and salazar. oh and the whole ginny, harry thing was...wonderful lol now i can't wait to see more of malfoy and harry.

[zeitgeistic]

:)

[vihm]

Oh, I read it all in one breath, and I have to admit you do honour to the theme of reborn Founders. The story of the two lovers is really moving, and even though Voldemort seems relatively sane there are still moments when Harry (and the reader) is reminded they should be very afraid. I've always enjoyed a good scare ;) And to think the diary almost succeeded in killing Ginny... I think that's the one weak point in your theory - wouldn't Tom have noticed that he has a soul bond with her?

I enjoyed the polyjuice scene immensely, but no doubt everybody has already told you how much they liked it, was impossible not to.

I'm looking forward to the second part!

[zeitgeistic]

RE: Almost killing Ginny.

Nope! And you'll see why eventually. ;D Second part will be out soon!

[k155_me]

that is just cruel! i said it was Rowena and Salazar like two diary extracts in and you told me i was wrong... or something. you were all evasive and i doubted my self but i was RIGHT ALL ALONG mwahahahahaaaa!

Anyway, i loved the ending with Draco and Harry ♥ ab fab huni! seriously cant wait to the 2nd part...

sorry this review is so late. i have a computer ban (but i have no school tomorrow so technically its not a school/weekend night, its a wierd night that has no name)

also. thanks for the xmas card/drawing loved it too ♥ couldnt remember if i already thanked you lol...

Voldy the House Elf *snort* ^^

[zeitgeistic]

You are ♥. I know, I know. I tricked you! Bahaha.

[k155_me]

i am i am, i know, so fabulous ^^

you are... did you know? ...evil :P i cant believe you tricked me ^^ (i suppose you didnt want to give away the plot line, so i forgive you, it was such a good plot line)! bye for now xxx