[FIC] "You First, Loser" Open Concrit Post

[zeitgeistic]

It's that time again. harrydracompreg did the big reveal on Sunday and so we all know that I'm the one responsible for the fact that Harry and Draco may or may not have [Spoiler (click to open)]named their daughters Lucissa and Lily James. For which I do not apologize.

This is the post where you are free to give me constructive criticism on this story and/or my writing in general, and

Comments

[sophie_french]

Sorry, like I said in my comment, I've loved every single word of it, so I'm not really be constructive here! :P
That was so funny, and I could so much imagine them behaving like that!
Thank you for writing this! ♥

[zeitgeistic]

Thanks, Sophie!

[ragnarok_08]

I really loved this :D

[zeitgeistic]

Thank you :)

[eidheann_writes]

Concrit: Write moar mpreg plz :D

[zeitgeistic]

I will write mpreg for you again ;)

[zeitgeistic]

No worries. Not usually my thing, but I wrote it for a friend.

[zeitgeistic]

I'm not actually a huge mpreg fan either. I think I really have to be in a mood for it. I think that's how i prefer my mpreg fics, too, so that's awesome that we're on that wavelength!