fanfiction Starsky & Hutch "Touch"

[zebra_three]

As I was preparing my new fic site for launch soon, I found this one. Forgot posting before, so I'll correct that oversight

Comments

[dawnebeth]

Oh, *wraps Hutch in a big hug*--as a nurse, I've seen family react like that. Afraid to touch because it might hurt the patient. Afraid because the reality is so devastating.

Very nice.

Dawn

[zebra_three]

thank you. I really wanted to hug him too after I wrote this.

[nickygabriel]

But it would be too cold without touching him!

Great story! Thank you for sharing. :)

[zebra_three]

thank you so much

[mac_sh]

aww hutch! *hugs him*
very nice! I like how you describe why he's afraid of touching him.
thanks for that! =) <3

[zebra_three]

thank you so much, I'm glad it worked and you liked it

[nancys_soul]

I can really believe that was what Hutch was feeling, I just want to hold him! Well done and I hope you find some more of these little beauties lying around and maybe a long one too!Thanks for sharing!

[zebra_three]

thank you, I just wanted to hold him too ;)
I'm not sure about longer ones lying around on my harddrive, the muse doesn't give me enough to actually finish one but there are some short ones somewhere

[hardboiledbaby]

I get a real sense of being poised in the moment, of a breath being held ... Very nice.

[zebra_three]

thank you so much, I'm so happy it worked out like I intended it