This was beautiful! I love how Prowl took Jazz's stuff instead of his. How everything the saboteur valued is now safe with Prowl. I do hope you'll continue this, so we can see how it ends (hopefully with the two meeting again).
Now jazz has some hope to keep him going. Good thing he checked the rooms!
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it. Prowl knew the chances were slim, but he couldn't give up hope or leave Jazz without a lifeline.
I was planning to follow up on this scenario and take it to a conclusion, but work got on top of me this week and I was too tired to make the next two segments flow right. I'll try to come back to them after the challenge is finished.
Wow Prowl really did think of everything and to take all of Jazz's personal possessions he loved most too. This was superbly done and I was both crying and smiling at the end. I hope Jazz can reach his mech soon :3
Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to continue this if I can get the muses to cooperate, but I'm not sure they will. Either way though, Jazz is on his way.
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Now jazz has some hope to keep him going. Good thing he checked the rooms!
Great job!! And very nice flow of words!
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I was planning to follow up on this scenario and take it to a conclusion, but work got on top of me this week and I was too tired to make the next two segments flow right. I'll try to come back to them after the challenge is finished.
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