Prowl x Jazz Anniversary Challenge - week 4

Sep 30, 2011 22:24

...And this is the second one:

Lost )

kms, challenge response, transformers, angst, prowl/jazz, g1, fan fiction

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renegadewriter8 September 30 2011, 22:07:02 UTC
This was beautiful! I love how Prowl took Jazz's stuff instead of his. How everything the saboteur valued is now safe with Prowl. I do hope you'll continue this, so we can see how it ends (hopefully with the two meeting again).

Now jazz has some hope to keep him going. Good thing he checked the rooms!

Great job!! And very nice flow of words!

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zea_taylor October 1 2011, 10:53:47 UTC
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it. Prowl knew the chances were slim, but he couldn't give up hope or leave Jazz without a lifeline.

I was planning to follow up on this scenario and take it to a conclusion, but work got on top of me this week and I was too tired to make the next two segments flow right. I'll try to come back to them after the challenge is finished.

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wicked3659 September 30 2011, 22:43:22 UTC
Wow Prowl really did think of everything and to take all of Jazz's personal possessions he loved most too. This was superbly done and I was both crying and smiling at the end. I hope Jazz can reach his mech soon :3

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zea_taylor October 1 2011, 10:59:38 UTC
Prowl wouldn't give up hope until he has no choice, or leave Jazz without a way home either. Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked it!

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ex_naggingf September 30 2011, 23:13:15 UTC
What a fantastic couple of stories! I hope you continue and that Jazz is able to meet up with the Autobots soon.

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zea_taylor October 1 2011, 11:01:45 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to continue this if I can get the muses to cooperate, but I'm not sure they will. Either way though, Jazz is on his way.

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zea_taylor October 1 2011, 11:02:38 UTC
Thank you. I ran out of time and energy to take this scenario any further, but I'll try to get back to it sometime.

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fianna9 October 1 2011, 00:13:08 UTC
Of course Prowl would leave Jazz clues. I'm sure they'll have a great reunion.

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zea_taylor October 1 2011, 11:05:47 UTC
Prowl wouldn't give up hope so quickly or easily. And Jazz won't give up either!

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