Overcharged (part 3 of 3)

[zea_taylor]

Title:            Overcharged
Author:         zea_taylor
‘Verse:          G1
Rating:          T/PG-13
Characters:   Jazz/Prowl (established), Beachcomber
Warnings:      None

See here for part one
See here for part two

Part Three

Comments

[fianna9]

Wonderful story. I love how the Twins realized what was going on and were dealing with things during the mess. Beachcomber was awesome.

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I'm always intrigued by why various Autobots turn up when they do in G1. I just couldn't resist introducing Beachcomber in this one :)

[prowl]

Amazing job! Loved how the story flowed and we finding out as Jazz does.

[zea_taylor]

I'm glad you enjoyed the mystery! It was fun to weave the clues in as I went along. Thanks for commenting :)

[rose0mary]

Lovely job.

I can't pick a favorite piece - it's all over the place.
Beachcomber and his distracted ramblings along with his entire character: On the whole though, his silhouette was still that of the mech Jazz had known on Cybertron - a pacifist at spark, as so many other Autobots had once been, but with the strength and courage to join the fight without compromising those views.
Jazz and his resigned understanding that Wheeljack's latest device is going to explode (nonchalant even!). plus the fireworks
Prowl seeking the quietest, most abandoned spot he can find (due to oversensitivity),
and the epilogue!

Jazz giving Megatron's troops the same troubles Optimus Prime's troops are undergoing - and yet, it is a simple trade. (Wonder if Swindle had a hand in the transfer of High Grade cubes for Normal Grade cubes).

Thank you for sharing.

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! I very much enjoyed your comments. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the fic. It was a lot of fun to write, and Jazz pretty much took control, so I'm glad it worked for you.

And now, lets just hope the Autobots get over their hangovers before the Decepticons get over *theirs*!

Magnifique!

[1readervb]

Bravo! A lovely story! I really liked the hole mystery-aspect; Jazz coming home with no clue, gradually gathering evidence, and then finding the missing person at the end. Very satisfying emotionally and mentally! I liked the little hints and such throughout that indicated Jazz' feelings for Prowl, as well as his behavior when faced with sloshed command and sundry. He handled himself and everyone else skillfully and the little swap at the end was lovely! Thank you for the terrific read!

Re: Magnifique!

[zea_taylor]

Hello there! Thanks for commenting - I'm delighted that you enjoyed the fic. I had a lot of fun weaving the mystery and explanation together, so I'm glad you thought it worked. I appreciate you taking the time and trouble to let me know :)

[kkcliffy]

The whole story was great, but I think Jazz's way of dealing with the Decepticons was my favorite part!