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zauzat

A Mighty Fine Man - Part 4/4

Oct 14, 2010 14:49

( A Mighty Fine Man - Part 4/4 )

a mighty fine man, nc-17, big bang fic, pike/mccoy

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zauzat October 13 2010, 15:58:28 UTC

Yay, someone read it! *not hovering over the comments, no, not at all*

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

shighola October 13 2010, 16:27:53 UTC

Wow. That was amazing. Love the role reversal with Confident!McCoy and Unsure!Pike. That was a delicious long, slow ride to some unbelievable hotness. I cannot wait for the follow-up stories in this 'verse.

zauzat October 13 2010, 16:41:19 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The whole idea was to try and find a realistic scenario for McCoy to pursue Pike. I do have a tendency to promise sequels and fail to deliver but in this case the next story is already being betaed.

firstlaw October 13 2010, 17:02:08 UTC

Wow, I loved this! McCoy chasing down Pike is quite uncommon.. but came out very realistic... Loved bossy mcCOy despite his trauma and unsure PIke incapable of letting go. Beautiful story, thanks!

zauzat October 13 2010, 17:45:29 UTC

McCoy in pursuit was the basic prompt. I'm glad my interpretation worked for you.I'm very fond of this pushy McCoy. Thanks for commenting.

jimpage363 October 13 2010, 17:53:24 UTC

Wow, that was hot and amazing!@

zauzat October 13 2010, 18:10:29 UTC

*g* thanks

Brava spockside October 13 2010, 18:46:11 UTC

Holy cats. I love how joyful Bones is in bed, how dominant, and how Chris is all, "Shut up and fuck me already, big guy." "Lube." "Bossy." Charming!

Nice to read slash that isn't just for slash's sake. And for a "first time" fic, it was good for me too.

Re: Brava zauzat October 13 2010, 18:50:11 UTC

I'm very fond of that scene, them being happy and snarky and just fitting together after their long journey. I'm glad it worked for you too!!