FIRST OF ALL I am so incredibly envious of your ability to actually write the investigation side of this story. This is where I completely failed with my police AU - I had no idea how to write about the crimes and investigation or ANY of that. And yours works so so well here, like its just seamless and works in the story.
SECOND OF ALL, my feelings. So many feelings. I just really really love super heightened stakes in AUs, and these are DOING IT FOR ME. There's the secluded sappiness but there's also the life-threatening shit and oh god his dream, and jfc all the crying, its wonderful. They're so devoted to each other and Leslie has so much faith in him and even I felt like I'd been slapped in the face during that fight but GAH. They're so lovely.
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH OH MAN. I'm so impressed with how you keep each chapter so interesting and intense and fresh. I try not to read it too fast because I want it to last longer, but I can't NOT read it fast because it's so suspenseful and just plain GOOD. The last scene in this one particularly!!
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FIRST OF ALL I am so incredibly envious of your ability to actually write the investigation side of this story. This is where I completely failed with my police AU - I had no idea how to write about the crimes and investigation or ANY of that. And yours works so so well here, like its just seamless and works in the story.
SECOND OF ALL, my feelings. So many feelings. I just really really love super heightened stakes in AUs, and these are DOING IT FOR ME. There's the secluded sappiness but there's also the life-threatening shit and oh god his dream, and jfc all the crying, its wonderful. They're so devoted to each other and Leslie has so much faith in him and even I felt like I'd been slapped in the face during that fight but GAH. They're so lovely.
THIS IS ALL JUST SO GREAT OK
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