Fic: Broken Substitutes - Part 3 (3/4)

Mar 09, 2010 19:14


Full headers & Part 1 are [ here].

Holmes/Watson (past Mary/Watson); NC-17; 7’600 words for this part, about 33’000 overall

Summary: He couldn’t allow himself to grow dependant on something that could only break him again.
Disclaimer: I totally disclaim.

Broken Substitutes - Part 3 )

holmes, fic, holmes&fic

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jenlee1 March 9 2010, 22:22:08 UTC
You know, I'm ashamed that I haven't commented on this yet, because it's fabulous. Well-written, and tense, and really hot, which is a very nice combination :)

I look forward to the last part...

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zarah5 March 12 2010, 09:15:01 UTC
I think many people prefer to comment only on the last chapter, so, hey. Thank you so very much! *beams*

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zarah5 March 12 2010, 09:17:31 UTC
I see Watson as someone who has a lot of principles, so he probably would be struggling with the situation. Also, I love it so much more when people have to work at something before it, um, works. Did that make sense? I need more coffee, I think. Thank you!

(Next part in a few hours, and then I am done with this, thank God.)

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gogglehead84 March 10 2010, 00:27:41 UTC
This is great! I can't wait to see how it ends.

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zarah5 March 12 2010, 09:17:57 UTC
Only a few hours more... Thank you, hee!

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mothergoddamn March 10 2010, 00:34:47 UTC
HOT DAMN. I adore this fic!

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zarah5 March 12 2010, 09:18:08 UTC
Why thank you!

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driftwoodq March 10 2010, 01:00:55 UTC
FFFFFFF I WAS ABOUT TO START TEACHING MY DRAMA CLASS AND I WAS LIKE 'HMMM....ANY NEW FANFICTION?' AND THEN I SAW THIS AND I WAS LIKE 'DFHLSKFGHAHRGUSHE' and freaked out. Just as amazing as the last two parts. I CANT WAIT FOR THE THIRD SO I MAY WORSHIP YOU.

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zarah5 March 12 2010, 09:18:53 UTC
Eheh, how did the teaching go after that? Seriously, thank you so very much! *beams*

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