Comments | zarah5: Fic: A Silly Phase (Sherlock Holmes

zarah5

Fic: A Silly Phase (Sherlock Holmes - Holmes/Watson)

Jan 31, 2010 20:59

This is foxxcub’s fault. Mostly inspired by the movie, if taking an odd turn here or there. It comes with the plot, really. Kudos to torakowalski for Britpick and e-mails that brighten my days, to inderpal for soundtrack-ing and to syllic for putting up with this madness.

Holmes/Watson
PG-13
~7’800 words

Holmes would probably be able to come up with a scientifically ( Read more... )

holmes, fic, holmes&fic

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torakowalski January 31 2010, 20:07:03 UTC

Yay, you posted!!!

Also, oh my god, the art. That's adorable. ♥

zarah5 February 1 2010, 21:07:10 UTC

*blinks* What happened to yesterday's reply?! Anyway. Yes! Art = so, so adorable! Just looking at it makes me beam!

selfille January 31 2010, 21:24:30 UTC

Oh my gosh, that's amazing. BB!Holmes is adorable, and I just love how he attaches himself to Watson =)

Everything in your story flowed so smoothly and you did such a good job with the characterizations, too. I could definitely see this actually happening, especially considering Holmes is just the type to forget to thank a gypsy xP

Also, this: "Don’t you think he loves you back?" Ah! My heart! That gave me that lovely punch-y heart clench-y feeling, if that makes any sense at all.

Oh, and: "But he’d be stupid not to." Because you know Holmes would totally see it as an intelligence thing.

zarah5 February 1 2010, 21:08:56 UTC

This comment! It made me happy, okay? So much. Thank you! A first story in a new fandom is always a little terrifying, so reading this comment made me beam.

(Of course Holmes would forget about a polite word of thanks. And everything must be logical, even when he's a kid.)

miss_dearheart January 31 2010, 21:33:38 UTC

This was exceptionally sweet. Serves Holmes right. Thanks for the extras!

zarah5 February 1 2010, 21:09:39 UTC

He learned a valuable lesson! *g* And the ultimate pay-off was probably worth it.

miss_dearheart January 31 2010, 21:35:51 UTC

The Zip file requires a password, it seems

zarah5 January 31 2010, 21:46:59 UTC

Oops, sorry. Password is "Holmes"! :)

inderpal January 31 2010, 21:47:24 UTC

The passwort is 'Holmes', enjoy. :)

inderpal January 31 2010, 21:48:28 UTC

Hey you! Wheeeee, you posted, this is so amazing!:D

zarah5 February 1 2010, 21:10:35 UTC

I did! The first story in a fandom is always so amaaaazing! And a bit terrifying.

(Also? I am happy to report they had sex!)

inderpal February 1 2010, 22:03:31 UTC

Ahahaha, thanks for making my whole day with this comment!

(Why is the sex not in my inbox yet?!)

zarah5 February 2 2010, 06:01:06 UTC

Because I thought you might be too busy for sex in your inbox! *g*

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