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twnchesterangel August 7 2014, 06:37:01 UTC
Ok, this chapter DESERVES one of these: ghjklkjhgfdghjkdghjk This chapter was amaaaaaazing. First, the phone call at the beginning. I could hear Jensen trying to be disinterested, cold, closed off and it was painful to read because I just KNEW Jared didn't quite understand what was going on at first. He trusts Jensen completely and I don't know, it just made me sad. But I understood where Jensen was coming from, putting the shields up, protecting himself, feeling insecure. It was heartbreakingly perfect. And then Jared went over and still, Jensen didn't trust Jared's motives. That whole conversation about Jared not knowing what friends with benefits was and how Jensen's "friendship" was the most important thing to him and then Jensen admitting he had learned to expect the worse from people and apologizing for being an asshole...I LOVED that conversation. I swear, I read it FOUR times. Lol And "fixing the fucking tragedy" of Jared not having seen Indiana Jones *gasp* made me laugh out loud. The sexy times were HOT, by the way. Damn, ( ... )

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zara_zee August 7 2014, 07:50:10 UTC
Oh yes, Jensen is just awesome with the shields! Jared though, he just kind of sneaky snuck in under them! He does that! :)

I'm so glad you liked that whole conversation(four times...wow...) it was an important one!

Hehehe...you know I love to mix SPN canon stuff with my fiction! And I really liked that 'sex torture dungeon' scene between Kevin and Dean. I loved Osric's squeaking and the dumbfounded way Jensen played Dean's response, so yeah, that was going in! :) Trece laughed every time she read that scene! :)

Thank you for such a lovely comment! :)

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twnchesterangel August 7 2014, 12:05:17 UTC
You know what else I noticed? When "Kevin" explained his real name being Osric, some people call him Rick, some call him Ozzy, it was exactly what he said at ChiCon. Lol Besides the amazing story, awesome characterization and the beautiful writing, I so thoroughly enjoy the easter eggs you put throughout your stories. It's like a scavenger hunt and it's so much fun. So thank you. *hugs*

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zara_zee August 7 2014, 12:37:40 UTC
Hehehe! Easter Eggs ftw! They're there for people to find and I so love it when people do! :)

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