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Big Bang 2012: The Iron Tongue of Midnight

Jun 13, 2012 22:11

Part Nine

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twnchesterangel June 16 2012, 05:59:45 UTC

Ohhhhhhh how I love broken Sammy and fiercely over protective big brother Dean. Well, you know what I mean. Haha Loved this chapter too!! You're batting 1000 baby!! "Sammy, you were always his favorite." Aghhhh! I just adore you. And OMG, Sammy yelling at Brady with his arms flying out at his sides...guh. I can just see it. Your descriptive writing is just amazing. I can just picture Sam all wet, slumped up against Dean's door, Dean muttering "son of a bitch" and looking all around the parking lot while cramming his gun in the back of his jeans as he crouches down to grab his Sammy and drag him in the room where he can take care of him. I can see it all. You've literally transported me into this world and it's all in my head, how everything looks and how everything happens, their expressions, their movements. Just awesome. And the showdown with Dean and Jess was incredible. I love how they're both blond, 6'1", green eyes, birthdays on January 24, and protective of "little Sammy". No wonder Sam is torn and confused. Dean and Jess are ( ... )

zara_zee June 16 2012, 06:58:46 UTC

Ah yes, the angry-Sam-arms. I just love the angry-Sam-arms! :)
And you have no idea how pleased I am that you found the scene where Dean brings Sam into the room really visual...because I did too! I was visualising it so hard when I wrote it, and really trying to just record what I was seeing in my head, so I'm just thrilled that that came through!
I've got a bit of a soft spot for Jess, but as you say she would never be enough, no matter how much Sam likes her, not when his soulmate is out there!

confuzed June 18 2012, 16:12:34 UTC

You write assbuttBrady very well...And Jessica telling Dean he was way out of Sam's league was hilarious!! I am more worried about what Brady is going to do than the faeries...

zara_zee June 19 2012, 00:30:19 UTC

Thank you! I do like to twist around canon lines! Yeah, Brady is a bit of an unknown quantity, I guess!