Comments | zappeej: Drifting Across The Ocean

zappeej

Drifting Across The Ocean

Jan 06, 2009 22:01

( For a friend, a lover, a husband, a child, a partner, any loved one who left us. )

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Comments 6

doniczka January 6 2009, 15:00:49 UTC

God,so moving yet so calm at the same time.Couldn't tear my eyes away.You wrote it?Bravo.

zappeej January 6 2009, 15:06:58 UTC

awww, thank you.. I had tears in my eyes while writing this one last night.. :)

doniczka January 6 2009, 15:20:45 UTC

You got the same reaction from me when I was reading it.It's just so,true for the lack of other words.Idk what is it,but I really love when you called the moon 'a shadow of its predecessor'.Great job,can't wait to read more from you:)

zappeej January 6 2009, 15:27:48 UTC

thank you bb! I think I was just fortunate enough to have something to write about in real life.. Although I can't really say I'm fortunate to experience such things. Gah.

And thank you again.. writing is an outlet, I'm sure you agree bb. Sighs.

mangobaby January 7 2009, 21:48:20 UTC

I just. You just. *swallows*

This means something incredibly personal to me. And you wrote it so...beautifully. My heart aches.

The force of the storm pried my fingers off your hand, loosening my grip, my safety, my surety.

and

You were gone and I was alone. This is the calm after the storm. This is my unbearable reality.

Holy shit.

Oh, and I friended you. :) I hope that's alright.

zappeej January 8 2009, 04:41:38 UTC

Thank you.. :) This was a piece that I wrote, most especially for me. If an emotion simply becomes too oppressive, I find that writing helps as an outlet. When the feeling becomes translated into words, it somehow becomes tangible, easier to let go, at least for me.

It's more than okay, I friended you back. :)