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zapf_chancery

Rude Party Guests (fic)

Apr 29, 2012 16:53

Title: Rude Party Guests
Character/Pairing: Wash/Miles
Word Count: 4553
Rating: NC-17
Spoiler alert: pre-series, altU

Summary: Wash can't help her protective instincts, or that itch she has to scratch.

AN: A "sequel" to Off-Wing; references things (vaguely) that took place in that story. Thanks to sky_kiss and admiralkatefor working through those last two kinks to get this ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

inu_midoriko April 29 2012, 21:03:06 UTC

YUUUUS OMG HER REACTION. HER FACE! BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IT'S PERFECT AND BRILLIANT AND GAWD. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT SO MUCH :D. Ah... I do maintain Miles is a slight asshole for doing it in his brother's bed hahaha but. The development for their MHR sexy times. :D. Goddess. GODDESS. WHY DO U DO SUCH AWESOME THINGS.

zapf_chancery April 30 2012, 00:38:50 UTC

Why do I do it? I think it has something to do with you egging me on the entire time. :p

We can discuss exacticalities tomorrow. :)

sky_kiss April 29 2012, 23:22:16 UTC

Snarky, snarky, snarky, how I do so love it.

And omg, I will not lie. When I read through this think of Frayani it makes so much more sense. Like, you don't even KNOW. And those tiny shifts make all the difference. Love Wash being all protective and the relationship with Miles.

AND MUAHA! I do NOT disapprove of this so THERE! :D

zapf_chancery April 30 2012, 00:48:07 UTC

Yes, this is simple Ayani, not super Ayani. Why else would she be so concerned about finger food and Wash's hair? She's just as protective as Wash in her own housewifey way. :)

Your and Kate's help was invaluable to fix those things. I am very glad you don't disapprove (because I don't want to be stabbed).

morganel April 30 2012, 01:21:39 UTC

Awesome with cherries on top. I do like pre-TN Alicia and her snark, and care for Ayani. Miles is an asshole. But I do like how you portray him. Alicia is awesome, plain and simple. If that didn't make sense it's because I am feverish. Until next time.

zapf_chancery April 30 2012, 20:53:38 UTC

It makes perfect sense.

I took a lot of care with Miles' character because I really wanted that balance between huge jerk and real, understandable person, as well to balance him and Wash's personalities without either going too far into 'impossible' territory.

Thanks! :)

goblin_dae April 30 2012, 23:33:17 UTC

Oh, your Miles is an asshole. But a self-aware and slightly more mature asshole than last time, which makes him so much more likeable. And Wash handles him perfectly :D I love the sexy snarking so much!

"I'm not a fool. I know what you were doing! And just look at your hair!"

*snort* I love Ayani's concern for Wash's hair. It's adorable. She's such a sweetheart.

scarletalpha May 15 2012, 15:09:34 UTC

Delightful. He's still cocky but he's better at pushing people's buttons to get certain reactions out of them (I suppose that extends to physical ones as well) and Wash knows to take advantage of the situation for nothing more than it is. Also enjoyed seeing a different twist on her concern for and desire to protect Ayani.