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zapf_chancery

The Lunch Date (fic)

Mar 21, 2012 20:06

Title: The Lunch Date
Characters/ Pairing: Mini-Bamfs, Wash/Taylor
Genre: Romance, Humor, Family, soul-eating faff
Word Count: 1688
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: your appetite
Summary: There's distractions and DISTRACTIONS.
A/N: Fluff and miniBAMFs. This is fluffy and has miniBAMFs, and is not my fault or problem. (sky_kiss should be consulted)

( The Lunch Date )

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Comments 11

sky_kiss March 22 2012, 01:46:14 UTC

D'awwwwwwwwwww! I maintain. Deep down, you're just a big softy. YOU CANNOT CONVINCE ME OTHERWISE!

zapf_chancery March 24 2012, 01:17:33 UTC

Shhh, just don't tell anyone else!

morganel March 22 2012, 01:48:02 UTC

This was great. I love the ending.

zapf_chancery March 24 2012, 01:27:48 UTC

I don't think we're going to do a miniBAMF challenge again. I don't think either of us were really happy with how our efforts turned out, but I'm glad you liked it, even for that tiny little bit at the end. Thank you.

scarletalpha March 24 2012, 01:15:58 UTC

Hahaha I wondered where that initial bit was going. Hilarious.

'His father would certainly understand an uncontrollable erection, but his mother was less diplomatic about the whole thing.' Love it.

Sex hair. Taylor would know about that wouldn't he.

Love it.

zapf_chancery March 24 2012, 01:31:55 UTC

It was supposed to be silly misdirection, only to reveal miniBAMFs, but that was probably ruined by the AN mentioning said miniBAMFs. Hoisted myself by my own petard.

I couldn't think of why she'd be less diplomatic, but just knew she would be.

And I bet Taylor has PHENOMENAL sex hair. :D

Thank you!

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:05:58 UTC

HA! YUS! I CAN REVIEW!

So... I LOVED THIS. It was fluffy and adorable and wonderful and the fact Taylor said he had sex hair was HULARIOUS. Ah... I love you :D

zapf_chancery March 27 2012, 23:15:42 UTC

(Just so you know, sex hair was all your fault. Interpret that however you would like. <3)

inu_midoriko March 29 2012, 01:47:16 UTC

Hahahaha! Dont mind if I do ;). I'z glad my off hand comments inspire such things <3

goblin_dae March 24 2012, 17:17:16 UTC

Hah, teenagers (well, twenty-somethings, but they still act like teenagers...). You write them well! All hormones and lovey-doveyness.

"I was the same way at your age."

And every age after that, given the age at which they had the mini-BAMFs :D Jamie probably doesn't want to know what went on on the kitchen counter they grew up with...

zapf_chancery March 27 2012, 23:20:59 UTC

I think Sam is exactly like his father, in every way. The colony had better watch out. :)

And yes, Jamie will be functioning in a hazmat suit for the forseeable future.