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Descent - Chapter 44

Jul 05, 2009 22:46

Title: Descent
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: R - NC17
Reference: Anime. A few things and people have been pulled from the manga here and there.
Type: Angst, Divergence (splits off from episode 32), Drama, Romance, Mystery, Political, Yaoi, Het, etc.
Pairings: Roy/Ed, Al/Winry, (other minor pairings both yaoi and het)
Warnings: Language, ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

patterson1219 July 6 2009, 05:22:57 UTC

Wonderful chapter, though I think Al should've caused some physical harm to Russell for the comments towards Winry. Tsk, tsk... punch him in the face Al! *sigh* And I thought the earrings were sweet! Honestly, adorable Al - so don't let other people make you think different! By the way, the best line was certainly Pinako's comment concerning the ear piercing, "Seriously. Men have no real tolerance for pain.” Hahaha! can't wait for the next update... thanks so much! XOXO

... will we have some Edward in the next update? *crosses fingers*

zakai_ July 6 2009, 05:33:43 UTC

Thank you :) Yeah I think so too, though I think Al tends to be a little more reserved when it comes to punching people. I know isn't Al with earrings just so cute? XD

Yes, we will have much more Ed in the next chapter. <3

sara_rojo July 7 2009, 21:08:32 UTC

Amazing!! You made me think about things I usually don't...like, when somebody has a shower at the Rockbells, he/she is exposed to anyone who happens byXD
Wow, that's specially awful for a girl...poor Winry

You continue to make "Russell" wonderfully unsettling...but bad Envy, bad, he can't control or behave himselfXD. Even trustful Al is starting to suspect himXD...
Is real Russell even alive? I hope he is. I like him (I also think he'd get along famously with MustangXD)

You know, your Pinako is finally fleshed out (I kind of hoped she would, seeing how well you write adults) and she's awesome. She's stern but kind, and very wise amd accepting. You do know men have a lower pain tolerance than women, don't you? It's biologicalXD ( ... )

zakai_ July 9 2009, 01:30:00 UTC

Oh yeah definitely. I mean, did you notice in the series that there wasn't even a shower curtain? D: I know I would be a little weirded out to shower outside with nothing there.

Pinako is such a great character. I love writing her. *laughs* and yeah I have heard that men really don't have as high of a tolerance for pain as women do.

*chuckles* well, we'll have to wait and see what Al's reaction to Ed being with Roy is. Okay, so *I* know, but it wouldn't be very nice of me to spoil it for you ^_~